Date: 08-16-16 - 02:29 pm Title: Savage Land
I know it's been a long while, but I hope you update this. So far the stories have been incredible...can't wait to read more.
Date: 05-04-16 - 01:23 am Title: Savage Land
Pkease please please finish this story, Windrider!!😢😢😢 This story is too awesome to go unfinished!!
Date: 05-06-15 - 10:04 am Title: Savage Land
Obsessed with this ff series!
Please update soon ;)
Date: 02-27-15 - 10:33 am Title: Savage Land
I just fininihed the first story and was so excited that you had a sequel, but it hasn't been updated. I hope you complete this.
Date: 08-06-08 - 03:56 pm Title: Savage Land
OMG, this chapter was DEEP!
please update, and soon.
i understand perfectly about classes and all, but wont you please?? Think of the CHILDREN!!!
Date: 07-23-08 - 05:12 am Title: Savage Land
i have one double entendre: HURRY!
Date: 09-06-07 - 06:37 pm Title: Savage Land
Geez, a whole population of people living underground, all victims of such horrid things. The stark contrast between the sweet looks of the baby girl and her cut out tongue made everything even more darker and disturbing. *still shudders* It's clearly understandable now where Longshot is coming from...
Date: 07-26-07 - 11:52 am Title: Savage Land
Wow. Awesome reintroduction to a wonderful fic-verse. Ororo and Logan's pained separation echoes so clearly through the scenes here. Storm lost and confused, confronted by not only Longshot's work but her own doubt was masterfully written. Brava, darling. Brava.
Date: 07-22-07 - 10:09 pm Title: Savage Land
OMG it's Christmas. She updated Divergence! *crowd roars* And you did not disappoint.
Looks like I need to add this one to the "For those who like to cry" thread. After seeing the baby with it's tongue cut out, I don't think Logan would be able to hold in those tears.
Good job, windy!
Date: 07-22-07 - 09:10 pm Title: Savage Land
Wow! That was...shocking! And you've definitely got me intrigued. I can't wait for more.
Date: 07-22-07 - 06:21 pm Title: Savage Land
Yaaaaaaaaay... knew you had it in ya! can't wait for more. For you this was short.
Date: 07-21-07 - 04:35 am Title: Savage Land
Ok reel me in!! :D
Date: 07-21-07 - 12:55 am Title: Savage Land
I am soooooooooo glad you have picked-up this fic. It is one of my favorites.
Date: 07-20-07 - 11:37 pm Title: Savage Land
Nicely done. I anxiously await the ROLO moments. I guess all refugee camps are sad although the baby girl really tugged at the old heart strings. :(
Date: 07-20-07 - 08:12 pm Title: Savage Land
Goodness gracious. You know how to bring the pain when you write tragic characters, and an entire population of persecuted people.
I know you weren't too enthusiastic about working on this one for a while, but I'm glad you did. I wasn't sure that I liked Longshot or not before, but he's definitely been redeemed here, almost a "Magneto Lite" who wants to help free the mutants from baseline oppression, but not with as much of a genocidal agenda. I can't wait to see what happens when he comes face to face with Ali again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cee. Praise from one of my fave authors is always grin worthy! **beams** This chapter is actually lighter than i had originally written it, but the darker version didn't set well with me, so out went the torture victims and such. I decided to leave it up to the reader to decide what was gruesome enough for them. ;)