[Report This]Date: 01-20-08 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hee hee, loved it when Warren woke up after Betsy's kiss and how they were comparing the current events in their lives to fairy tales. :)
Ororo and Logan not showing off what they could do was funny; I really enjoyed that scene.
And now we finally know how Logan ended up in prison. Was it a setup? Or was Scott just glad he finally found someone to blame for the killings, no matter if it was the real killer or not? Either way, poor Logan. Seven years! Damn.
I really liked the way Ro reacted to finding out about their stories. Loved it when she asked Remy if he could teach her how to pick locks. :)
Author's Response: At first I was going to have 'Ro do one of her mini storms in her hand, but that would showing off lol
As for Logan... he was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. Being covered in the girl's blood and showing his claws that looked like they could've been the weapons didn't help. Scott thought that was enough evidence. Long story short... those two really don't like each other.
[Report This]Date: 01-04-08 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 15
I hope you continue this while you're on break!!!
I love Betsy and Warren, did I mention that before? That scene was cute. I'm picturing his face pinning her when he woke up and knocking her socks off with surprise. Logan and the roses was funny, too. I see more evil to come from Jean, which you know makes me happy.
Author's Response: lol yes you did. I had to put a little classic disney fairy tale in this somewhere. Enchanted rubbed off on me :) Just as long as you don't want Jean to win.
[Report This]Date: 01-04-08 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter 15
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: thanks Dragon :)
[Report This]Date: 09-16-07 - 07:04 am Title: Intro
I really, really enjoyed this chapter! It was longer and full of stuff - lots of good stuff! I was relieved to see my thoughts about Warren’s fate were true - yay me! Yay you! I'm guessing you're in England? Jetlagged still? Hoping not, hoping for an update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Yeah I'm in England, sitting in my dorm... er college room right now. I'm not jetlagged, but no new updates quite yet. Dream 2 will probably be the next update.
[Report This]Date: 09-06-07 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved Cee's cameo! Especially when she kept referring to Logan and Ro as "couple". But she must know, she's a fortune teller, heh :)
Yay, Betsy, Rogue, Charles and Hank are back in the picture. And Warren, too. Good to know he's still alive. The crown cannot be left on Jean's head.
Author's Response: lol I agree. But Warren isn't quite ready to challenge her for it. And Logan and Ro just needed a little nudge in the right direction.
[Report This]Date: 09-06-07 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. This story is one of my favorites. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it! I'm not exactly sure when the next update will be. I'm a little jaglagged at the moment.
[Report This]Date: 09-03-07 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
Naturally I enjoyed this chapter! Lots! I got a kick out of Remy and Anna remembering each other, and of Betsy going to Warren's rescue, so good work incorporating the other 'ships in this story. Man, Jean's evil.
Author's Response: just wait... she's no where near finished yet.
[Report This]Date: 09-03-07 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: lol sorry it took so long Dragon. I was busy getting ready to move! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 08-31-07 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh goodie, they're traveling together now :D Logan told neither of them about the other... LOL *shakes head*
They better be careful, Jean seems to be in a destructive mood ;) Warren catching fire, now that must've hurt. I'm not sure he's dead though...
Yeah, please continue! And stop asking that LOL
Author's Response: lol well Remy was out flirting and Logan was probably asleep.
[Report This]Date: 08-31-07 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
"Are you always dis negative?" - "Yes!" LOL :D
Yay, late lunch. Sounds good to me!
On to the next chap, I'm about to catch up, wheee :)
Author's Response: yay, Steph is back!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 07-13-07 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 13
Qui, continue
[Report This]Date: 07-06-07 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 13
And so it begins. The Three Musketeers are together ready for adventure - off to fight the Wicked Witch I'm assuming. Very curious to see what happened to Warren and can hardly believe Erik's out for the count - is he?
Author's Response: lol sounds like Wizard of Oz, but yeah kinda. You don't think Warren is dead? He did get hit with 2 fireballs... Yes, Erik is gone. He wasn't exactly a villian, but he wasn't good either. Thanks for the double reviews :)
[Report This]Date: 07-03-07 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 13
As I have said before............. "HELL YEAH!!!!"
Author's Response: lol glad you enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: 07-01-07 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well...I was going to say that if Warren kept being so annoying I'd be forced to shove a sock down his throat...guess John beat me to it though....O.o. I do feel bad for Erik though...I liked him...and Jean is still being scary. I also liked how Logan felt the instant concern for Ororo traveling by herself...it's very Logan-esque. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one...please post it soon. Now it seems that the plot have really picked up pace!
Author's Response: Well she is evil... I tried to give Ororo and Logan a little bit of a spark. It still seems a little slow to me, but I'm glad you think it's picking up!
[Report This]Date: 07-01-07 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 13
So now we see what Jean was up to! Neat! I liked Warren and Erik, but if someone had to go, it was okay if it was them, since there are already a pretty good number of antagonists in this, with Jean and John left. As usual, I love Piotr. All of his scenes and dialogue have a sensitive, quiet feel. Remy meeting Ororo was cute, too.
Author's Response: lol I think you're the only one who'd say neat about Jean's blood magic. I sent you a message on y!m btw. Did the RoLo have enough spark for you?
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