Date: 04-05-07 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heh. Enjoying this very much so far. Well done with the choreography and the timing.
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it!! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02-28-07 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm thinking that last line must be Logan, eh? Good chapter. If I'm not mistaken I read the first version on fanfiction.net? Completely different wasn't it? I may be mistaken but so far I'm loving this version. So much is going on it's fun. Jean and Warren are quite interesting. I'm assuming Warren has an older brother or the murder didn't take place? Very interesting.
Author's Response: Yup the last line was Logan and he was also the prisoner looking out the window in the intro lol yeah I had the original on ff.net but I didn't like it so I decided a while ago to rewrite it. It just took me forever to actually sit down and get to work! Well... I can't tell you either way about that... you'll find out soon!
Date: 02-14-07 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
More please :)