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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

This was fabulous. I love Logan getting that faint scent of Ororo and changing his plans instead of going on the attack. Your phrasing and pace are very good. Remy winking at Rogue was cute.

Author's Response: I'm glad the scene hopping wasn't too confusing. I had the scene with Logan and Ororo in my head before I wrote the intro lol At first I was going to do the entire chapter with no dialogue, but I thought that would be mean. I'll be mean later ;)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 6

Why must you ask? Of course you should continue. Perhaps fairy tales aren't to everyone's tastes but I love them and this chapter has a lot of answers. This has become more and more interesting. I still think my favorite character is Jean but now that I know she's party to murder? Hmm, don't know but I do know it'll be intriguing to find out what's up with her and especially with her and Scott.

I liked Remy and Logan off on their own and it was good to see Ororo getting into the mix. Your description of her scent, of what Logan smelled made me laugh. How appropriate too. I've a good idea of who this wayward killer might be but could be surprised, who knows. Any way I won't know until you update. The pot is boiling keep stirring! ;D

Author's Response: lol just something to ask instead of giving away more answers. And you never know... someone might decide to say no lol I love fairy tales too. I included that Jean scene with you in mind since I know you like her. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-07 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh, 'Ro and Lo' were so close to actually meeting (though I'm sure after hearing those revelations, Logan wasn't in the mood for making new acquaintances).

I adored the Remy and Rogue scene. Love at first sight, yes?

So, a young girl was murdered by someone who kills for kicks? Might this person go by the name of... nah, couldn't be... or could it? *plot thickens yet again*

I'm hooked! This is an amazing story! Please continue!

Author's Response: I had to put a little romance in there somewhere and I'm such a Romy fan. That's my second favorite pairing. lol Send me a private message of who you think. I might surprise you. The killer was mentioned in the Intro just like Logan and Remy were btw. I'm glad you like it!

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