Okay, call me hooked :) I had some time before going to bed and the short chapters made me read right through them, so I didn't leave a review for each of them. I just couldn't stop LOL
I'm really enjoying this story so far! Can't wait to find out who the killer is. I have an idea, but it might be too obvious. Or is it? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out LOL
Logan catching Ro's scent was great - "rain, fresh flowers and dish soap" LOL :D I liked that he relaxed immediately. Rogue and Remy's short meeting was cute. I hope they'll meet again.
Damn, why didn't Charles listen to Ro? Now she just took off, taking things in her own hands. Hope she's gonna be okay...

Author's Response: lol see short chapters are good sometimes! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I'm having fun writing it even though it's deciding what to give away for each chapter. So much to choose from! I loved writing that scene with Logan and 'Ro. Well I can at least tell you she's not going to die... that helps right?

Great descriptions. You are getting good at this.

I like how you took us briefly into the mind of the villain, something that is always fun and exciting to read. Do that again, as you move closer to showing us who it is, just in dribs and drabs. It whets the reader's appetite!

Good stuff.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I plan on doing that since Warren and Erik won't be around much for a few chapters.