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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-20-08 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hee hee, loved it when Warren woke up after Betsy's kiss and how they were comparing the current events in their lives to fairy tales. :)
Ororo and Logan not showing off what they could do was funny; I really enjoyed that scene.
And now we finally know how Logan ended up in prison. Was it a setup? Or was Scott just glad he finally found someone to blame for the killings, no matter if it was the real killer or not? Either way, poor Logan. Seven years! Damn.
I really liked the way Ro reacted to finding out about their stories. Loved it when she asked Remy if he could teach her how to pick locks. :)

Author's Response: At first I was going to have 'Ro do one of her mini storms in her hand, but that would showing off lol As for Logan... he was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. Being covered in the girl's blood and showing his claws that looked like they could've been the weapons didn't help. Scott thought that was enough evidence. Long story short... those two really don't like each other.

Reviewer: Cecelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-08 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 15

I hope you continue this while you're on break!!!

I love Betsy and Warren, did I mention that before? That scene was cute. I'm picturing his face pinning her when he woke up and knocking her socks off with surprise. Logan and the roses was funny, too. I see more evil to come from Jean, which you know makes me happy.

Author's Response: lol yes you did. I had to put a little classic disney fairy tale in this somewhere. Enchanted rubbed off on me :) Just as long as you don't want Jean to win.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-08 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter 15

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: thanks Dragon :)

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