[Report This]Date: 04-13-07 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
HELL YEAH!!! Goddess! (exasperated sigh) what else would you do with an original and greatly written story when it's just getting good!
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 04-08-07 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter 9
Of all the people, John was on the bottom of my list.
Yay! Ro and Lo finally meet!
*waits for the next update*
Author's Response: lol there's a list on my livejournal with all the clues I gave throughout the chapters. tigerbaby09.liverjournal.com
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks lol I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'll update as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 9
Very very good! I'm enjoying this story tremendously....but I get the feeling that you aren't the biggest Warren fan in the world. =P Nice story and Logan and Storm finally met! Now Rogue and Gambit need to be formally introduced though they already seem to be smitten with each other. Can't wait for chapter 10! Please put it up soon!
Author's Response: lol Actually I really like Warren, but he seemed to be the perfect char to be the snobby prince. I'm not a Jean fan though (if that's not obvious).
Don't worry, I'm a big Romy fan ;)
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes! They finally meet! Thanks for more Jean - never thought I'd ever say that! Guess it's a testimony to how well you've developed her here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: lol I brought her in just for you. You know she's evil right? :P
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Cool, you brought in Piotr! And Logan and Ororo finally meet face to face! I'm a happy camper now. Great descriptions and pace. Remy's a doll. The exchanges between him and Logan are always great.
Author's Response: lol I thought he'd be the perfect first friendly face for 'Ro to see. I was going to have ya'll wait for them to meet for another chapter, but that would just be cruel wouldn't it?
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Heh. Okay, You're going to think I'm weird, but with the talk of Beauty and the Beast and with Disney running around in my brain, the scene with N'Dare and Xavier and her running off and what happened totally reminded me of that opening scene in Bambi. Yes, I'm still traumatized over Bambi's mom.
Great descriptions. Very well put together.
Author's Response: hmm you're right... that was like Bambi. It wasn't meant to be and I've never watched Bambi (for that reason). But it fits in, you never learn what happens to Belle's mother.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heh. Enjoying this very much so far. Well done with the choreography and the timing.
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it!! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04-02-07 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Nope, no idea. Do I even know him - the character per se I mean? LOL :D Only thing I know so far is, that he's male, likes cigarettes, wears a dagger, kills for fun, and that it's not Vic.
I guess I'll just have to wait and see LOL
I really enjoyed the Logan/Remy interaction here. Looking forward to some RoLo :D
Author's Response: you do know him lol and you missed a few things. here's the list: he's male, messy hair, smokes cigarettes (hmm, what goes with cigarettes?), is a bit insane so he kills for fun and he only has the dagger for the story so that's not cannon. I probably gave you too much info but that's ok lol you'll find out soon. RoLo should be coming up soon too :D
[Report This]Date: 03-31-07 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 8
It's a good story so far but where's the Rolo?
Author's Response: lol where's the fun in bringing them together right at the start? They did come close to meeting and Logan knows her scent now, which may come in handy soon. thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03-31-07 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Just as it's getting started you leave us hanging. I will say I like your pacing and you update fast so that makes up for it. I'm really looking forward to when Logan and Ororo meet up - next chapter maybe? As far as the killer my guess is Victor.
Author's Response: I wish I could update faster, but once a week is all I can manage right now. lol next chapter? hmm... we'll see. I can tell you that I'm going to put Jean in the next chapter just for you lol
[Report This]Date: 03-30-07 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 8
I haven't figured it out yet, but now you have me in suspense! I love the exchange between Logan and Remy, they feel the way they are supposed to in the comics! Great dialogues, and I like the image of Logan looking like an animal in the shadows, as well as the fact that Remy doesn't appear to be afraid of him.
Author's Response: I'm trying really hard to have them act how they did in the comics and the old cartoon but throw a little movieverse in too, so that means a lot for you to say that! Especially since I worry about how I'm writting Remy's accent. You'll find out who the killer is soon, promise!
[Report This]Date: 03-23-07 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay, call me hooked :) I had some time before going to bed and the short chapters made me read right through them, so I didn't leave a review for each of them. I just couldn't stop LOL
I'm really enjoying this story so far! Can't wait to find out who the killer is. I have an idea, but it might be too obvious. Or is it? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out LOL
Logan catching Ro's scent was great - "rain, fresh flowers and dish soap" LOL :D I liked that he relaxed immediately. Rogue and Remy's short meeting was cute. I hope they'll meet again.
Damn, why didn't Charles listen to Ro? Now she just took off, taking things in her own hands. Hope she's gonna be okay...
Author's Response: lol see short chapters are good sometimes! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I'm having fun writing it even though it's deciding what to give away for each chapter. So much to choose from!
I loved writing that scene with Logan and 'Ro. Well I can at least tell you she's not going to die... that helps right?
[Report This]Date: 03-22-07 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter 7
I love your short chapters but sometimes they're way too short so like, hell yes continue! Now, having gotten that off my chest I just wish more people liked fairy tales, doesn't bode well for mine if I decide to put it up. :-(
Author's Response: lol I'm sorry the chapter is so short. But 'Ro's in it! Doesn't that make up for it a little bit? And you have a fairy tale?? Post it!!! I wanna read it now!
[Report This]Date: 03-21-07 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 7
Great descriptions. You are getting good at this.
I like how you took us briefly into the mind of the villain, something that is always fun and exciting to read. Do that again, as you move closer to showing us who it is, just in dribs and drabs. It whets the reader's appetite!
Good stuff.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I plan on doing that since Warren and Erik won't be around much for a few chapters.
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