[Report This]Date: 03-15-07 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was fabulous. I love Logan getting that faint scent of Ororo and changing his plans instead of going on the attack. Your phrasing and pace are very good. Remy winking at Rogue was cute.
Author's Response: I'm glad the scene hopping wasn't too confusing. I had the scene with Logan and Ororo in my head before I wrote the intro lol At first I was going to do the entire chapter with no dialogue, but I thought that would be mean. I'll be mean later ;)
[Report This]Date: 03-15-07 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 6
Why must you ask? Of course you should continue. Perhaps fairy tales aren't to everyone's tastes but I love them and this chapter has a lot of answers. This has become more and more interesting. I still think my favorite character is Jean but now that I know she's party to murder? Hmm, don't know but I do know it'll be intriguing to find out what's up with her and especially with her and Scott.
I liked Remy and Logan off on their own and it was good to see Ororo getting into the mix. Your description of her scent, of what Logan smelled made me laugh. How appropriate too. I've a good idea of who this wayward killer might be but could be surprised, who knows. Any way I won't know until you update. The pot is boiling keep stirring! ;D
Author's Response: lol just something to ask instead of giving away more answers. And you never know... someone might decide to say no lol I love fairy tales too. I included that Jean scene with you in mind since I know you like her. Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 03-14-07 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, 'Ro and Lo' were so close to actually meeting (though I'm sure after hearing those revelations, Logan wasn't in the mood for making new acquaintances).
I adored the Remy and Rogue scene. Love at first sight, yes?
So, a young girl was murdered by someone who kills for kicks? Might this person go by the name of... nah, couldn't be... or could it? *plot thickens yet again*
I'm hooked! This is an amazing story! Please continue!
Author's Response: I had to put a little romance in there somewhere and I'm such a Romy fan. That's my second favorite pairing.
lol Send me a private message of who you think. I might surprise you. The killer was mentioned in the Intro just like Logan and Remy were btw. I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 03-09-07 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yes, you, continue!
Author's Response: lol yes ma'am
[Report This]Date: 03-09-07 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, the plot thickens. I love it, as usual. *waits for the next chapter*
Author's Response: lol well I did say it was going to start to pick up. I'm trying for a nice long chapter 6, but it depends on how much I feel like giving away
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Spoiled Warren amuses me and of course the dynamic X-duo do too. The only bad thing I can really say is that the chapter's way to short.
Author's Response: lol I'm working on Chapter 6 as we speak, but it's going to take some work... very important chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03-04-07 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Once again, I am kicking myself for not reading the original, since this is so well written. So yes, continue. Frequently. Good scenes, good dialogue, nice pace.
Author's Response: lol the original wasn't that great in my opinon. I'm glad you're enjoying this! Now... where's the update for money dance? *looks hopeful*
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Lockheed, yay! He's such a darling little dragon. I can't wait to see what happens next... especially when 'Ro meets Lo'!
Thanks for the new chappy! Update again soon, OK?
Author's Response: lol I'm glad I managed to fit a dragon in for you. Kitty wasn't originally going to be in this but it worked out. I'll be on spring break next week so I'll try to update a lot
[Report This]Date: 02-28-07 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yup, continue please. Jean's intriguing here, I like her a lot and Remy and Logan are fun together. Nice.
[Report This]Date: 02-28-07 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
More and more interesting.
[Report This]Date: 02-28-07 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm thinking that last line must be Logan, eh? Good chapter. If I'm not mistaken I read the first version on fanfiction.net? Completely different wasn't it? I may be mistaken but so far I'm loving this version. So much is going on it's fun. Jean and Warren are quite interesting. I'm assuming Warren has an older brother or the murder didn't take place? Very interesting.
Author's Response: Yup the last line was Logan and he was also the prisoner looking out the window in the intro lol yeah I had the original on ff.net but I didn't like it so I decided a while ago to rewrite it. It just took me forever to actually sit down and get to work! Well... I can't tell you either way about that... you'll find out soon!
[Report This]Date: 02-28-07 - 10:49 pm Title: Intro
Love fairy tale fics so I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Good prelude.
[Report This]Date: 02-25-07 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Continue?
Umm, yeah! I love stories that involve magic spells and royal kingdoms. Throw in a dragon or two, and I'll love you forever!
Author's Response: hmm... a dragon? lol A big fire-breathing one or a little one like Kitty's pet? I'll see what I can do
[Report This]Date: 02-22-07 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 3
ah this story is amazing! More soon! =)
Author's Response: lol expect a new chapter on Wednesday
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