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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 10:55 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

What really kills me about all this is that you get it right straight out of the gate, writing a fic so good it's a benchmark by which other Rolo fics should be measured, much in the vein of Bloodbonds or She Walks in Beauty. From the opening paragraph, I laughed my ass off, since the humor was genuine, recognizable from real life, and the characters spoke to me and told their story very frankly. Logan was lovable, Ororo had my instant sympathy, and I could visualize the wedding (having seen that Macarena at least a dozen times, performed just goofily). I hope you will continue to update this! I cheered when it landed in my inboc when I got my Favorites alert.

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Date: 03-09-07 - 06:10 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Once again, you have reminded me why I have such mixed feelings about Jean. She's likable and smart and sassy on the one hand, and always vulnerable, but on the other, she's selfish and flighty. It was great seeing the exchange between her and Scott, and as usual, seeing Scott's devotion to her, even when they argued the point about Logan and Ororo's friendship.

I love the pace of this story. I love the various relationships that make this more fun than watching a Days of Our Lives episode mixed with a little bit of Jerry Springer. Feels like by the end of the story, we'll have had a crazy wedding and a chair across someone's nose. More, please.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 02:09 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Story started with, I thought, yet another danger room scene much to my dread. I don't know why it is but I've read a lot of them lately. Well, this was good, very quick too and I enjoyed their compaionable relationship which was clearly shown here. I'm thinking this is pretty good. And then I get to the sex! It just was slipped in there pretty neatly. A crisp, scene well done, well written and the length - no pun intended - was just right. Now I'm curious how Logan will get over all this. Well done.

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-07 - 09:38 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Wow....There's a real rollercoaster going on, all in the 1st chapter!!! I really like it!! A more vunerable Logan, more 'realistic' setting, a skanky Jean (lol) and plenty of RoLo angst--consider me eating this up!

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 02:51 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

You know, everyone always thinks Jean is such a "good girl". But sometimes she pulls off being a bitch rather nicely.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 04:16 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT! WHAT! WHAT!

OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rolletti (twitching)

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 12:10 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OMG!!, what an cliffhanger. This is an *wonderful* start,
update soon. ;)

Reviewer: Rising Goddess1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 06:31 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Oh my gosh, poor poor ororo.
Jean's a slut!
update update!! ASAP

Author's Response: Yeah. Jean's a Ho. But I'm trying not to make her an evil ho.

Reviewer: pop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 03:22 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

love d story so far. can't wait 2 see more rolo!

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 03:17 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

WHOO!!! You go girl!!! (or boy) This was pretty good for a first story! It seemed a bit crushed together for one chapter, but I still enjoyed it. What a twist! :) Draw out the story a BIT more in future chapters, but I'm already hooked on this story. :D Good luck!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm all girl. Thanks for the feedback. I do have a pathological need to explain stuff. You should've seen my first couple of drafts. Yikes!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 03:08 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Oh, you're good. You've got me hooked already. I was already on for the ride when you said "pussy whipped without the pussy." That was great. Darn Logan...I hope Ororo settles his hash.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 02:21 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OH NO YOU DIDNT END IT THERE! Damn, this is good. I am hooked. I loved the no powers aspect, but in a school. It's so tangible and real. Very nice.

BOO ON JEAN.
BOO ON LOGAN FOR BOIKIN JEAN! Why doesn't he know how Ro feels?! Sike, I can't wait for the moment of realization comes in.

Poor Scott.
Extremely poor Hank.

MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response: Logan just got hit in the face with reality when Jean basically said he was nothing but her magic stick. He's closer to realization than he knows.

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 01:49 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

great one!!!! continue, continue plsss!!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 01:47 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Oh My. O.o

What?!? No chapter 2?!?!?!? You damn tease. LOL. Update this is fabulous!

Author's Response: Hee hee. Ask and you shall receive.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 01:04 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

ohhhh... this is great. loving the story so far. dun stop writing yea? update soon.

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