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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 02:19 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

When Logan said he'd make Hank eat those stars and garters I couldn't keep from laughing. I adore Hank and that's one of my favorite expressions simply because I've always adored Beast when he was with the Avengers. Another very good chapter. Easy to read, not too long and very enjoyable. I'm reading at work btw when I should be working on my own story.



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, Darlin. I loved writing that Poker flashback scene.

Reviewer: Slowly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-13-07 - 01:05 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

Wow. This is good stuff. So much drama and conflict...I love it! Can't wait for more. I've read tons of stories where Jean and Logan get it on behind everyone's back, but this is the first one to make my jaw drop when I realized it was her he was with in the locker room. I totally didn't see that coming for some reason. Good stuff.

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-07 - 11:59 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Very interesting start here. I'm eager to see where it's going.

The relationship between Ro and Logan is awesome, dead on if you ask me. Strong friendship with deep undercurrents. nice.

My poor Hank. *huggles him*



Author's Response: Sigh. I know. Poor Hank. As I wrote the poker scene in the second chapter I was kinda bummed that I'd offed him. Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-07 - 10:00 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Lawd have mercy...you know, I don't ever think I've said this before, bui I was actually holding my breath for the last 1/3 of this story. Goodness gracious, that was rough! Talk about bad luck. I'm really feeling for Ro right now...hopefully Logan can pick up those pieces soon;)

Author's Response: The angst factor is high right now, but this is a RoLo fic, so they'll get it together....eventually.

Reviewer: Starnoble03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-07 - 05:24 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

This is a very well written story. You do a great job of keeping the story moving along where it could get slow and stale. I love the love triangle that you have going on with these characters. I was a little shocked when I found out that Logan was sleeping with Jean. I thought it would have been some new character, and after hearing how Scott was feeling about getting married and having to WAIT for his wedding night!! I just knew that everything was hunky Dorey bewteen Jean and Scott...Jean is a trip having Scott to Wait while she'd off boffing Logan...If I were Scott I'd have to seek some nasty revenge....and sad to say Logan is no better. I cant feel sorry for him having Jean hurt his feelings when he was actually FRIENDS with Scott, and yet still thinks his feelings for Jean take precident over eveything else....I love Logan, but with his actions in this fic he gets no sympathy from me....and I cant imagine Ororo's disgust with them BOTH when she finds out what they did....I was almost in tears when Ororo found out about the ring...I love stories that can spark that kind of emotion....Keep up the great work and I will be looking for another chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful response. The test is to see if I can redeem Logan in a believable way. I think of the two, Jean committed the bigger sin. At least Logan's motives were based on the naive notion that Love Conquers All. Whereas Jean's motives were less pure and more complex.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 06:28 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

GAH! You can't leave me hanging. That was perfect. The poker game, Jean flashing everyone the bird, the scenes in Hank's parents' home. That exchange between Ororo and Logan was intense. You can practically taste the shared guilt.

Please, please update! I'm getting delirium tremors over here!

Author's Response: LOL! It can't be half as bad as mine when I am waiting for the next update on Money Dance!!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 06:12 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Dang. Everybody is having a difficult time of it (Hank worst of all or not since he died believing he was loved and marriage-bound). Guilt endlessly abounds for both friends. Oh boy. Really a great fic. I look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 02:50 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

OMG, break my heart.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 04:13 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

Whao. "I would have said no." never sounded so powerful before.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 01:00 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

Oh, poor Roro. :( How heartbreaking and terrible for her. Poor Hank too :(

Very emotional, very intriguing. This is a great story.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 05:38 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

JUST RIP OUT MY HEART WHY DONTCHA!

URGH!!!!!!!!!! ok, ok, where is chapter three?

Rolletti (looking for more Kleenex)

Reviewer: Cassandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 05:14 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

I like the story. But I have to say that I am disappointed in Logan. He claims to be Scott's friend but that doesn't stop him from sleeping with Jean. When does Scott find out the truth about Jean and Logan and does Ororo find out as well? Those are reactions I would like to see.

Author's Response: I cut Logan some slack. He's been telling himself that he was in love with this woman for two years. In his mind, when she throws herself at him in the garage, it is simply her coming to the same conclusion and they are going to be together. Except...well you'll see. Also Ro and Scott will find out in a very unexpected way. And it ain't pretty.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 02:01 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Boy oh boy, this is an interesting story. Now Logan is about to see what Ororo is REALLY feeling...and not just about Hank.

Please Update soon. I like it.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 01:50 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

WOW. i mean... WOW. sheesh... if this is your first story... i wonder what ur next one is gonna be like! cant wait for more.
keep up the great work yeah?

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 12:45 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

This is your first story????
it's sooo good, cant wait for another update!
i like the way the situation and story line was set in the first chapter, how things were/are between jean, scott logan, ororo and hank etc, it's sets the scene well and now we're able to follow the development of the story.
it's so sad about the ring, but i love the way Ororo is honest to logan about wether she accept or not, it's so sad!
dont leave me waiting too long for an update

Author's Response: Yup my first foray into fan fiction. Thanks for the feedback. I love feedback!

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