[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 02:25 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Logan shopping - that was funny. Why is it that when you send a man out shopping the inevitably end up coming back with the wrong thing? I love the use of British words and especially liked the mate part as it rang so true and then you turned it around and had Logan going there but oh to lose that thought so quickly! An intriguing ending. Very well done, Pandora. I really like this story a lot.
[Report This]Date: 02-15-07 - 05:56 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Poor Hank, Roro, and Scott.
"We have plently of time." Those words sound so ominous...things aren't going to be on the up and up for Roro yet, are they?
This story goes on my Anxiously Awaiting Updates List.
[Report This]Date: 02-15-07 - 02:13 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Another great chapter....Im ready to see how Ororo and Scott find out about Jean and Logan...and how the inevitable revenge will occur...I know I know...patience....Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 08:30 pm Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Hmm... What's Charles keeping from Ororo? Nice interaction b/t Logan and Bets. I can't believe she saw Jean leaving the motel and didn't see Logan. I can't wait until the shite hits the fan.
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 12:56 pm Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
OH NO! What does Charles have to say? Bad, bad you to leave us hanging. LOL Great chapter by the way. I love this part, "His voice was deep and cultured, carrying the resonance similar to that of a classically trained actor." ROFL That was a good one.
I love to see Ororo in the intimate daughter role with Xavier, it isn't written enough. I can't wait til the next chapter so don't wait to long ok.
Happy Valentines Day
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 03:43 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Awww, hell you can't leave me hangin' like THAT!!! Anyway, *great* chapter, can't wait for the next one!! So hurry up! lol
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 03:21 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Speak to her. Speak to her about what! Ugh you are evil!!! I wonder if Logan will help out with the cookin. *giggle*
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 01:51 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
this story is way amazing! please continue!
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 01:48 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
I love this story. I can't even begin to describe how I feel like I can reach out and touch them and the way they feel. For instance, this is one of the few, and I mean FEW, versions of "bitch" Jean that I love. Sure I hate what she's doing, but you have made it so human, and it feels like a situation that anyone could find themselves in.
Yea, she's being selfish and only looking out for herself, but she honestly believed that she wasn't hurting Logan, and believes that in the case of Scott "what he doesn't know, won't hurt him" idea.
Good job. You really nailed it. I can't wait for more. You have me drooling for me.
Author's Response: Bingo! That is exactly what I was shooting for with Jean. I personally dislike the Jean character in the comic books. But I am really trying to not let that color how I am creating my version. She's selfish and a little spoiled. She does love Scott but Logan represents the forbidden. Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 01:34 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
ohhh what will charles gooing to tell ro???oh my !
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 12:31 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
"We have plenty of time.”
Now there's a foreboding statement if ever there was one.
Ooooh, Bets almost caught Jeannie and Logan on the lowdown. Nice.
Loving this fic! More please?
[Report This]Date: 02-14-07 - 12:08 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers
Why do I get the feeling that something is about to hit the fan?
Author's Response: Lol. There are a couple of somethings about to hit the fan.
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