Date: 02-23-07 - 04:04 am Title: 5. Next of Kin
This was of course spot-on. Jean and Ororo have some great talks in this. The CPR class was realistic, I could picture the kids' facial expressions as they are talking to each other and visualize the gestures. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: 02-22-07 - 08:36 pm Title: 5. Next of Kin
Did someone intentionally cause the car accident? I wonder... Nice to see Logan uncomfortable about his feelings for Ororo. I'm really anxious to see who the Smoker from the Shadows is. Please update soon!
Author's Response: All I say is....is that there is no wasted information in this fic. In some chapters, what may seem like a throw away line or some useles expostition or description actually will come into play sometime later on.
Date: 02-22-07 - 06:21 pm Title: 5. Next of Kin
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME? I have goosebumps on top of my goosebumps. Is Charles and Moria alive? I can't stand it. You must post SOON, LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!
Rolletti
Date: 02-22-07 - 02:43 pm Title: 5. Next of Kin
GAH! I need more. I've been aching for this fic, and now I need more. **bats lashes** c'mon, you know you want to. :)