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Reviewer: TinaFab Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-22-07 - 01:30 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

I have no words. This story is just so good. And I especially love this chapter. I could hear the music and smell the beer. I especially love the part where Logan "sags abruptly against the wall" once he is out of sight of Ororo. I can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: storm's rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 07:55 pm Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

excellent! i was extremely dissapointed there isnt more!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 02:12 pm Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Augh! Why'd you stop?!?!? **bats lashes prettily** update? please? This fic has sucked me in and has me enthralled. More soon I hope. :D

Reviewer: sunrunner Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 10:25 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Great story, really enjoying it so far! Would love to see more

Reviewer: Smily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 09:36 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Beautiful fanfic! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feeback!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 05:26 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Who's lurking in the shadows? Please tell me it's Remy! Loved the 'Ro and Logan scene. They are so freakin' HOT together! I can't wait to read when they admit their feelings for one another. And will 'Ro ever find out about Logan and Jean's rendevous. I wonder if her feelings for him will change after that revelation.

Waiting patiently for more!

Author's Response: Ro and Scott will of course find out. I haven't written the scene yet on paper but I've mapped it in my head. The lurker will make his/her presence felt in upcoming chapters but not in an obvious way.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 04:15 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

I'm grinning as I'm typing this. If this were wrapped up in a paperback cover and sitting on the new arrivals shelf of Barnes and Noble, I would buy a copy for me and mail one to my sister. This isn't just fanfic scribbling, this is excellent!

You can practically taste the beer and smell the smoke in the bar, hear the character's voices and background sounds, and watch everything unfold. The "Ro and Lo Show" is one of those games that a lot of friends play in bars, but you never really see it laid out in the open like this so frankly.

Please indulge me. Update frequently, and keep the stories coming.

Author's Response: OC, I love your feedback makes we all squiggly inside. So far, this has been my favorite chapter to write. Lighter in tone than the previous and I think gives a good look at the Ro/Lo relationship I had been trying to establish.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 04:10 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

You know, I am really liking this story! Its a little different with Hank being killed off so soon. But it is different . And the ending hooks you for whatever you have in mind next! And of course, Ro and Lo are just made for each other. Wait until Jean finds out...she won't be happy, even though she doesn't want Logan for herself.

Good Update!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, Hank had to be killed early on. In my own way I am trying to stick with canon (at least UXM) but with my own twist. Also Hank's death has ramification throughout the remainder of the story. So it had to happen early on. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 01:34 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Oooh, who's that watchin' Ro &Logan? I'm loving this fic so far; I couldn't hide a smile when I logged on & saw the update! Next chappy please!!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 12:58 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Jean, Peitro, T'Challa, Yuriko...who who who?

I loved this update, alot. I can't wait for the warning of "sexual situations" concerning Rolo :D

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 12:44 am Title: 4. The Ro and Lo Show

Thanks for the update? Who is the mystery smoker at the end? Gambit? Sabertooth? Forge? Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-15-07 - 05:56 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers

Poor Hank, Roro, and Scott.

"We have plently of time." Those words sound so ominous...things aren't going to be on the up and up for Roro yet, are they?

This story goes on my Anxiously Awaiting Updates List.

Reviewer: starnoble03 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-15-07 - 02:13 am Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers

Another great chapter....Im ready to see how Ororo and Scott find out about Jean and Logan...and how the inevitable revenge will occur...I know I know...patience....Please update soon!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-14-07 - 08:30 pm Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers

Hmm... What's Charles keeping from Ororo? Nice interaction b/t Logan and Bets. I can't believe she saw Jean leaving the motel and didn't see Logan. I can't wait until the shite hits the fan.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-14-07 - 12:56 pm Title: 3. Those Succulent Gobblers

OH NO! What does Charles have to say? Bad, bad you to leave us hanging. LOL Great chapter by the way. I love this part, "His voice was deep and cultured, carrying the resonance similar to that of a classically trained actor." ROFL That was a good one.

I love to see Ororo in the intimate daughter role with Xavier, it isn't written enough. I can't wait til the next chapter so don't wait to long ok.

Happy Valentines Day
Rolletti

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