Superb as always. I do so enjoy the emotional unheaval you leave in your wake for Ororo and Logan. I'm most curious to read her reaction to Logan's bombshell.

The isolation and the lonliness, the tension and the mental exhaustion, the desperation and the confusion... you capture it all so perfectly here. Going along with their travels, we have learned to love these characters with an understanding of their own individual natures. So much they don't say to each other. And whenever they DO get to open their yaps, they say or do things they later regret. So human and so relatable. I may have said this before, but it is so easy for this to be a piece with original characters and not just another Ro or Lo foil. You have almost reinvented there two with their more human faces rather than superhuman. Their faults and their personal navigations through their emotions is a trip we all are familiar with. Again with the dramatic tension you have created. We also want to know the details of his past and what he's running from. We also want to know if these two can continue on with each other despite both their natural inclinations to sabotage something theyr share they both cherish. Update soon!

OMGOMGOMG!!!! You updated it is a mircale!!!!! Even though the chapter was a little short, it was great as always. The raw emotion was written to perfection as it always is. I am just so happy you updated! I feel a tear coming on * single tear runs down cheek* I just pray that the next chapter will come soon. I'll email you soon.