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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-07 - 06:30 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

I always love how you can make the transition from one couple to another. You had me hanging onto my seat before with Ororo and Logan arguing and 'Ro's heartfelt talks with Forge, but now I'm rooting just as loudly for Warren and Kitty. What they have feels genuine and easily possible in the "real world" and I was tickled at her comparing their intimacy to a Nora Roberts novel.

That moment with Ororo desperate to get Logan out from the rubble almost made me cry. Damn, that was good. Having her get socked in the gut by reliving the worst day of her life with someone she won't admit to loving was powerful and moving. Consider me moved. It's funny, during the recovery at the sight of the explosion, everyone sought out who they loved. That was excellent.

Reviewer: Wylong06 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-07 - 06:18 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

this story is brilliant! you use such good writing and make everything flow right together! keep it coming! :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 04:09 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

You know me, I love my angst. Kitty and Warren makes me warm and fuzzy. Never in the comics, but it's perfect for movie verse, since I love movie Warren. It's nice to see Kitty, usually the pursuer, or usually the one everyone neglects, having two guys who kinda like her for a change.

The scene in the kitchen was great. That would have given me a migraine, too. Even though I love my RoLo lovin' as much as the next person, I'm enjoying watching them argue. Keep it coming. This was well worded, well paced, and very engaging, Gainee.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-10-07 - 08:10 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

Oh man, you managed to release the tears. I had to cry when I heard mention of Ro's love for Scott. I'm a Scott lover myself. I'm always defending that guy and when he died in X3, I cried like I thought I never would. I was so disappointed that I had to not only see my man suffer over the bane of his existence, but also that she was the one to kill him. Sure it was the phoenix in her body though. I always felt Scott deserved better, but no, he was in love with that woman.

And then to see how she was trophied by Wolverine. I mean come on, as the phoenix she almost was successful in killing all the men who loved her, well 2 out of 3 ain't bad, I guess for her.

I loved how you wrote Storm, the feelings she has, the pain she's enduring. This is something rare you know. I think only Windrider1 has done that and it's something I'm grateful for, in X3 they made her miserable one minute and the next like nothing happened. I understand the role of the leader, but Storm was far more attached than that.

Something that I'm hoping to see is a possible relationship development between her and Kitty that was sort of implied in X3 and of course established in the comics.

Anyway, Storm is written excellently and although I can't tolerate Rogue, she was well done here in this scene with Wolverine.

I can't wait to see more, any chance of a Kitty/Bobby love---I'm pretty big on that shipper couple now. I don't know if I want Bobby with Jubes or Kitty, any longer.


Great job and I can't wait for more, especially when Stormy comes back. It's going to be great to see the drama develop between Ro and Lo, since I find Logan to be his indifferent bastard-like self---Well in regards to Ro that is.

VB

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 10:36 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

I have to agree with Marie on this one. Seems that healing is slow in coming to this group. Quite an emotional start.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 06:35 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

interesting take on storm being in love with scott. i can see how that would be a lot more obvious thatn her having any attraction to logan. i'm genuinely interested in where this is going!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 02:06 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

An excellent beginning full of surprises too. I really, really like this. I guess I've only read a little of one of your other stories so I'm not familiar with your style but if this is different than the norm for you it's a good different. It also helps me to start a story when it's first posted and this is certainly a story I'll be looking forward to reading each and every chapter. Will add it to my alerts in fact. Lovely job Gaineewop.

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 12:57 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

yeai!!!! another story from gainee =)

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 12:55 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

OKAY, OKAY, (sigh) I guess if Logan can be in love with Jean, Ororo can be secretly in love with Scott. (big, big sigh) LOL Great work by the way. There I was sitting in a parking lot reading this while I wait as a chauffeur mom, and I'm in tears. Thanks a lot, Gainee!

Poor Ro, send Logan to get her! (sniff, sniff) LOL

Smooches,
Rolletti

Reviewer: Kendall15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 12:47 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

Hey! I'm pretty interested in this story, a surprise to see tht Ororo had been in love with Scott. I wonder what will happen next, ideas pop into my head in prediction of the next chapter, but I'm waiting to see what you have in store for us. I'm sensing this is gonna be awesome!

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 11:52 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

I always did like the idea of Scott and 'Ro together. Too bad she had to love him privately. Her mourning of him was beautiful, Gainee.

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 08:51 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

I actually like the idea of Ororo having feelings for Scott. I know this is Rolo, but it'd be cool to see where that could've went...if anywhere at all.

I always like your work, that's no secret...keep it coming

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 08:50 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

Love your word choice. just the right combinations. Also, nice to give Rogue an observation of the things going on around her for a change. I find her too self absorbed usually.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 07:56 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

Wow. 'Ro was in love with Cyke? That's different. I wonder if Scott ever sensed her feelings for him. I love how you write, Gainee. I truly do.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 07:50 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

.... **is speechless**

In a very good way. Wow. Just...wow. You so rock!!

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