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Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-07 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

That's not just heartache. they are falling to pieces, poor mansion and people inside it.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-07 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Wow...totally intense. Really, just amazing and wow. Hey, I'm a Kitty/Warren supporter here. I'm tire of Peter/Kitty fics, so I'm all abut Kitty with anyone else fics. Actually I'd just like to see you address Warren's personalit and maybe hav her loosen him up.

Rogue was tolerable, I hate her, but I stomach her for you. :D Wolverine deserves a beating with a heavily splintered stick for bringing a woman over and fucking her on top of it. Oh dear me...

Anyway I'm all about Ro/Scott, and I would love to see how that would work. Shit, I'd love to see Ro have sex with Wolverine and say Scotts name, or even during a kiss. He wasn't the only one who was in love with someone in that god awful disturbing pairing. Ro just had the better half. :D

Great job, can't wait for the next chappie. I hope it's soo, since Iknow you're a fast and prolific writer.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-26-07 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Wow! This is interesting. Ororo is being human....and Wolverine is being even more...Wolverine. I like how it is developing. It is a different take that Ororo loved Scott....which is not unthinkable as they were so close....

Reviewer: Kendall15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-26-07 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

DAMN! Ro mad as hell! Good one!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Let it out, 'Ro! *sigh* Now I'm gonna check the Realm everyday for an update to this fic. Please update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Well all righty then. Storm's going postal and our dear Wolvie is indulging in his own special stress relief. Hopefully the kiddies can keep themselves mostly in line (libidos and all). ;)

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Well, you certainly know how to weave a spectacular story. Gutwrenching and emotional and it's only the first "official" chappie. Woot!! Y'know how I loves ya, baby!

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

So much pain, now I'm depressed. (sniff, sniff)

Rolletti

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Whoa! You can't just leave us hanging here! Well, I'm going to need a very fast update now. I really, really like this story. I was caught off guard by Logan's bad boy devil may care attitude at a school so I can't wait to see what happens if and when Ororo finds out.

I love how you've made Ororo mourning Scott and angry with Jean and just plain ol' could care less about Logan. I loved how you described her signature move, love the pictures you have at the beginning of each chapter, love this story!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

aw.. poor 'Ro. Too bad she didn't happen to wander downstairs when Logan walked in.. that would've been funny. But it's probably for the best that she didn't. Very cute scene between Kitty and Peter.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

i'm loving this! so glad to finally see an update! her pain is tangible, and i need more

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

this is a turbulent and powerfully written story. storms 'awakening' was particularly well written (in my opinion).

keep up the writing!

Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-25-07 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

I'm glad this story has been continued. This is a new element for Ro in my mind. I don't think I have seen her pining over Scott in this manner.

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