Date: 06-18-07 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
Thank God: Gracias a Dios. Never trust internet translators ;)
Author's Response: Ya know, that my first instinct from what Spanish I remember from childhood. Wish I'd gone with it ;) thanks
Date: 06-18-07 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
Wow. Caliente alright! That was hot.
Date: 06-15-07 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
Damn that was hot. Damn, Forge or Wolverine, Forge or Wolverine. I'm taking Forge, yum, and he speaks spanish. He could through som querida's my way, Wolverine's greatest romantic word is probably, '"fuck". More kitty/angel. Ooh and i like this idea of Piotr and Betsey, their funny!!
Date: 06-15-07 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
**heat rising** good lord. that was good. ummm... why am i single? I can'r read things like this and be single. lol.
But really. with words you induce passion. You feel the raging lust between Forge and Ororo. You could've made that scene longer for all i care. that was... whoa!
It'd interesting to find out just what Logan thinks he discovered.
**sighs** i can't wait for Bets to pry details from Ro! **swoons**
Date: 06-15-07 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
CALIENTE INDEED!!!! Whoo!
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
Wait...(picks up plate, checks for crumbs) there's no more???
There was so much naught humor in this, but at the same time, it was heartwarming and heartbreaking. Logan deserves the award for Longest Time Spent Getting His Head Out of His Butt. That moment that it dawned on him that Ororo lost as much as he did in that Danger Room scene was beautiful. Forge speaking Spanish? Loved it. Ororo in red with Jimmy Choos? Loved it. Merlot? Eh, not something I like to drink. But the whole scene in the club? Loved it. Warren and Kitty? Loved it.
Once again, you amaze me with this uncanny ability to make the reader feel so many impressions at once. Keep it coming.
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
Wow!!! This was HOT! I hope there is more (smile).
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente
So Storm got to ream Logan and be the woman in the red dress. Neat! I wonder what Logan will do now that he figured out the source of her distress. Should be interesting. :)