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Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-07 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter Five: Ángeles y Diablos

Sometimes i wish things really worked this way. sad but true. again, wonderfully written.

Reviewer: pop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-07 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Five: Ángeles y Diablos

please tell me ders goin 2 be some rolo action next chapter! good story thou!

Reviewer: :P Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-07 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

Thank God: Gracias a Dios. Never trust internet translators ;)

Author's Response: Ya know, that my first instinct from what Spanish I remember from childhood. Wish I'd gone with it ;) thanks

Reviewer: barbarab Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-07 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

Wow. Caliente alright! That was hot.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

Damn that was hot. Damn, Forge or Wolverine, Forge or Wolverine. I'm taking Forge, yum, and he speaks spanish. He could through som querida's my way, Wolverine's greatest romantic word is probably, '"fuck". More kitty/angel. Ooh and i like this idea of Piotr and Betsey, their funny!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

**heat rising** good lord. that was good. ummm... why am i single? I can'r read things like this and be single. lol.

But really. with words you induce passion. You feel the raging lust between Forge and Ororo. You could've made that scene longer for all i care. that was... whoa!

It'd interesting to find out just what Logan thinks he discovered.

**sighs** i can't wait for Bets to pry details from Ro! **swoons**

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

CALIENTE INDEED!!!! Whoo!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

Wait...(picks up plate, checks for crumbs) there's no more???

There was so much naught humor in this, but at the same time, it was heartwarming and heartbreaking. Logan deserves the award for Longest Time Spent Getting His Head Out of His Butt. That moment that it dawned on him that Ororo lost as much as he did in that Danger Room scene was beautiful. Forge speaking Spanish? Loved it. Ororo in red with Jimmy Choos? Loved it. Merlot? Eh, not something I like to drink. But the whole scene in the club? Loved it. Warren and Kitty? Loved it.

Once again, you amaze me with this uncanny ability to make the reader feel so many impressions at once. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

Wow!!! This was HOT! I hope there is more (smile).

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-07 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Four: Caliente

So Storm got to ream Logan and be the woman in the red dress. Neat! I wonder what Logan will do now that he figured out the source of her distress. Should be interesting. :)

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-07 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

I'm all about Kitty and Angel..woohoo!! He's cute, and he has those wings. Yum, sex in the air, lucky Kitty. How many people can offer you that goodness?! :D

Still liking Rogue, sort of. I just don't think I'll ever get into the character, no matter how nice they make her out to be. She irks me. :D

Storm and Wolvie. Well I'm rooting that something ruins her Friday night plans. Storm doesn't need a one night stand. Meh, wasting herself away on Forge. Sigh, oh well, he is hot though and she is an adult. Jimmy, get sick. Get sick Jimmy. Artie, break a leg, and Jimmy get sick and kitty get kidnapped, then Stormie has to stay. Wolvie's a man whore and has to really work to get into her affections.

I have to throw that out there as a challenge. A nice fic with Jean included, and where Wolvie actually recognizes, admits and starts persuing his attraction to Ro. Of course with Ro's adamant refusal of any relationship with a man who was in love with Jean. :D

Anyway great read, and I'm happy that Wolvie got some reaming, he's out of control. He's taking a piss and just not being cool when he does that whole I'll have sex where ever I want. Who cares who sees or hears what....that's just punky. Sometimes Wolvie is just a dick.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

great chapter really like how you dont have storm and logan falling for each other. and i like this new team

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-07 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

Dang, how did it get to be 3am? It's all your fault, Gainee. I love the fight scene in the office. Actually I was excpecting Logan to get fried a little. LOL Serves him right bringing that SKANK into the house. I like how Ro refered to the mansion as home when she talked about the "harem girls" ROFL. She didn't say, Not my house or The Mansion, but making that reference for them both. Sweetness.

So did he like tying Ro up ? Blew off a little steam as he did it.. LOL That would be funny flashback.. I can see Logan tying her up with joy saying, "I'm just keepin it real darlin. ROFLMBO

Rolletti

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-07 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

This chapter had all of my favorite things in it. Logan and Storm arguing, Forge on the down low, Warren and Kitty making goo-goo eyes at each other, and lots of great one-liners. I'm loving the tension in this. Forge is a good dancer? Awesome!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-07 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

Well Logan's a dick and good for Ororo. Last chapter I thought there wasn't enough Ororo and now I'm thorougly delighted. Perhaps making that phone call will put her on the road to recovery. Go figure but I'm rooting for the other guy right now though I'm sure that'll change when Logan "undicks" himself.

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