Let it out, 'Ro! *sigh* Now I'm gonna check the Realm everyday for an update to this fic. Please update as soon as you can.

Well, you certainly know how to weave a spectacular story. Gutwrenching and emotional and it's only the first "official" chappie. Woot!! Y'know how I loves ya, baby!

Whoa! You can't just leave us hanging here! Well, I'm going to need a very fast update now. I really, really like this story. I was caught off guard by Logan's bad boy devil may care attitude at a school so I can't wait to see what happens if and when Ororo finds out.

I love how you've made Ororo mourning Scott and angry with Jean and just plain ol' could care less about Logan. I loved how you described her signature move, love the pictures you have at the beginning of each chapter, love this story!

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

this is a turbulent and powerfully written story. storms 'awakening' was particularly well written (in my opinion).

keep up the writing!

Oh man, you managed to release the tears. I had to cry when I heard mention of Ro's love for Scott. I'm a Scott lover myself. I'm always defending that guy and when he died in X3, I cried like I thought I never would. I was so disappointed that I had to not only see my man suffer over the bane of his existence, but also that she was the one to kill him. Sure it was the phoenix in her body though. I always felt Scott deserved better, but no, he was in love with that woman.

And then to see how she was trophied by Wolverine. I mean come on, as the phoenix she almost was successful in killing all the men who loved her, well 2 out of 3 ain't bad, I guess for her.

I loved how you wrote Storm, the feelings she has, the pain she's enduring. This is something rare you know. I think only Windrider1 has done that and it's something I'm grateful for, in X3 they made her miserable one minute and the next like nothing happened. I understand the role of the leader, but Storm was far more attached than that.

Something that I'm hoping to see is a possible relationship development between her and Kitty that was sort of implied in X3 and of course established in the comics.

Anyway, Storm is written excellently and although I can't tolerate Rogue, she was well done here in this scene with Wolverine.

I can't wait to see more, any chance of a Kitty/Bobby love---I'm pretty big on that shipper couple now. I don't know if I want Bobby with Jubes or Kitty, any longer.


Great job and I can't wait for more, especially when Stormy comes back. It's going to be great to see the drama develop between Ro and Lo, since I find Logan to be his indifferent bastard-like self---Well in regards to Ro that is.

VB

interesting take on storm being in love with scott. i can see how that would be a lot more obvious thatn her having any attraction to logan. i'm genuinely interested in where this is going!