Reviews For Dream: Part 2
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Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-25-07 - 06:09 am Title: Beer and Oranges

i noticed it before tiger, from the heat she was exerting when logan touch her...i rem thinking 'pls dont let him know, pls don't let him know yet' and he didn't.
that why i lavyah tiger!!!

Author's Response: lol I couldn't let that happen just yet. Much too early for that. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 07:43 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

Aah, don't let it end here! Me wants more :D
What a cute scene when he found her sound asleep sprawled over her desk. And of course he just couldn't resist to call her on it later LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: lol I'm glad you enjoyed it! I liked writting that scene. Hmm... guess no one noticed that she was stuck in one of her dreams then. I'll have to work on that.

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 04:11 am Title: Beer and Oranges

Awwwww I love this story, (sigh) please update soon so I can have another reason for a big siiiiiigh.

Rolletti

Author's Response: I'll try, but I'm a bit under the weather right now. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-07 - 12:47 am Title: Beer and Oranges

Just as we're getting started! Ah, but a sweet chapter begging for a fast update.

Author's Response: lol well would you rather have GA or this?

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 05:42 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

Nice. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 03:47 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

You won me over once you put Dani in this! She's one of my favorites. Anna's such a nosy little somebody, isn't she? This is easy to read. Good formatting and word choice.

Author's Response: lol I love her too, even though I only know her from the cartoon. Yes she is nosy lol but she might be the push that Logan needs.

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 03:05 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

Very nice story. I like your writing style. It's easy to follow and engaging. Reading it with a smile on my lips. Very cute! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's good to know that it's easy to follow, sometimes it feels a little confusing to me lol

Reviewer: Spaceroses Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 02:32 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

Hehe....I love this chapter!^^ I'm glad I'm not the only one who got the feeling that Post X3 Ororo started getting into a really bad habit of working herself to hard. I also like that you're introducing comic book characters into a movie verse setting. Great job on this chapter, I love it. Especially the scene where she's napping in her office and Logan goes in to check on her. Great chapter and I can't wait for chapter 3!

Author's Response: it just seems like something she would do, but in this I gave her another reason to lol I'm trying to work them in... hopefully I won't butcher them... Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 01:33 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

ohhh tiger!!!i hope u'r writting now....i'm soooo excited with the next chapter.***still smilling***
pls more, more....pleasssssseee

Author's Response: lol no I'm not writting now. I just woke up really. glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 01:26 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: lol we'll see. I have a paper to write and the new chapter of GA to get out too.

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-07 - 12:22 pm Title: Beer and Oranges

I like this story. Very lighthearted. Though I am wondering exactly what kind of dream she has been having that is causing her to give him so much shade? And were they like this before the ice cream thing?

Author's Response: lol I just haven't rewritten the dream yet. I might... or I might leave it up to ya'll to imagine your own.

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