[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 03:47 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
You won me over once you put Dani in this! She's one of my favorites. Anna's such a nosy little somebody, isn't she? This is easy to read. Good formatting and word choice.
Author's Response: lol I love her too, even though I only know her from the cartoon. Yes she is nosy lol but she might be the push that Logan needs.
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 03:05 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
Very nice story. I like your writing style. It's easy to follow and engaging. Reading it with a smile on my lips. Very cute! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's good to know that it's easy to follow, sometimes it feels a little confusing to me lol
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 02:32 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
Hehe....I love this chapter!^^ I'm glad I'm not the only one who got the feeling that Post X3 Ororo started getting into a really bad habit of working herself to hard. I also like that you're introducing comic book characters into a movie verse setting. Great job on this chapter, I love it. Especially the scene where she's napping in her office and Logan goes in to check on her. Great chapter and I can't wait for chapter 3!
Author's Response: it just seems like something she would do, but in this I gave her another reason to lol I'm trying to work them in... hopefully I won't butcher them... Glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 01:33 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
ohhh tiger!!!i hope u'r writting now....i'm soooo excited with the next chapter.***still smilling***
pls more, more....pleasssssseee
Author's Response: lol no I'm not writting now. I just woke up really. glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 01:26 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: lol we'll see. I have a paper to write and the new chapter of GA to get out too.
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 12:53 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
Ah, that learns me to pay attention. Reading the previous story now.
Author's Response: it was my first, so it's not that great. I really should rewrite that...
[Report This]Date: 04-09-07 - 12:22 pm Title: Beer and Oranges
I like this story. Very lighthearted. Though I am wondering exactly what kind of dream she has been having that is causing her to give him so much shade? And were they like this before the ice cream thing?
Author's Response: lol I just haven't rewritten the dream yet. I might... or I might leave it up to ya'll to imagine your own.
[Report This]Date: 03-21-07 - 01:53 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
Wheee, I finally got to read this :D
Heh, no wonder she's avoiding him with an even more intense version of that dream of hers keeping her company at nights. Loved that Logan saw right through her little game of "if I avoid everyone he won't notice it's just about him" :)
I can't wait for more! I really enjoyed the first part. I think I read it about a year ago or so. I just hope you continue with this one. I want to know what's next! :D
Author's Response: I was going to just rewrite Dream, but I decided not to since I'm already working on a rewrite of GA and Dream was my first RoLo. I'm working on it lol
[Report This]Date: 03-19-07 - 11:44 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
Ah, reviewed this at fanfiction.net but didn't see it here. I'm hoping there's more..
Author's Response: lol I got your review there. I think I replied... maybe. can't remember, but I really think I did
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 05:10 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
WOAH you gotta update SOON!!! This is a great story you got going on here. I can't wait for the next chapter and I loved part one.
Rolletti
Author's Response: lol thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 02:24 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
Cute! I like the childish teasing.
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 02:07 pm Title: Dublin Mudslide
I like this. They seem so playful with each other in this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 09:02 am Title: Dublin Mudslide
oh this one is REALLY cute...pls continue tiger!!!
Author's Response: lol I'll see what those crazy muses of mine come up with, but I'd better work on GA first. Glad you enjoyed it!
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