Date: 07-21-07 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
Cliffhanger... this review is a bit of a post review because i read this chapter and the next one before i posted this review. Either it is still a brilliant story. Logan and Ororo are again presented in a good light and the trials and tribulations of domestic bliss.
The unleashing of the storms up in the sky was a good scene between mother and daughter and it eased up on the angst level that was building up.
Again another great chapter.
SKJ
Date: 06-09-07 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
Ugh! Cliffhanger!!!!
Date: 06-03-07 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
Both chapter are absolutely fantabulous. Fade was great, so glad you're doing a sequel.
Date: 06-02-07 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
O.o Come on! Don't leave me hanging here!!! Gawd damn it. If you weren't such a sweetheart I'd say you do it intentionally.
:P
Date: 06-02-07 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
All I can say right now is...God I love you...lol
Date: 06-02-07 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
awww, logans aging too! thats too cute if he subconciously is... thats makes everything much better.
Ken and 'Hurricane' mary are pure comedy loved that scene
cant wait to read what happens next, i's so intrigued
i love the portral of jean, henery and james, a brilliant mix of rolo, and jean ad ororo's moment was beautifully written.
update as soon as u can
Date: 06-02-07 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
OH MY GOSH, I HAVE GOOSEBUMPS ON MY SCALP!!!
Who is THAT in the woods???????????????
Great chapter, Gainee as always. I throughly enjoyed that it til no end. Thanks for updating such a heart gripping story so fast.
Rolletti
Date: 06-02-07 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter Two: Jeannie
that went better than i thought!!!