I was curious to see how the combination of Wade and Logan would work out when I read that he was meeting up with him in the first chapter but now – ah! Golden girls! Now that’s the nutty Deadpool I know and love! Projecting his love! So funny! Now that toothbrush comment made me squirm and yet how like Wade, eh? Any man that knows the Marvel universe so well will always has a soft spot in my heart.

OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH! She didn’t! Oh I’m at work hunched over my keyboard laughing as quietly as I can but dang – Badger? Oh no! Mongoose? LOLROTFLMBO!!! I am literally crying from laughing so hard, let me tell you, tears just running down my face! I’m loving this Storm!

Oooo, and yes Logan did put Forge right in his place! Yeefreakinghaw! And yes she did do a little Han Solo move on him but what a lovely twist! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!

Okay, finished this chapter and where’s the next? I need it like a fix! Please update ASAP! That said I have to tell you I really like your writing style. It’s uncomplicated and straight to the point which makes it refreshing to read. Also, no spelling mistakes that I could find. There were only a few minor mistakes, one in the last chapter and only one this chapter, the kind that happen when typing fast so you have improved immeasurably. It makes it all the more enjoyable to read, just a perfect delight to read! Splendidly done, Ogrenaught!


Author's Response: Deadpool is awesome hard to deny that, and puttin him with Logan as a "partner" just feels right. The han solo thing did come to mind but only thing i could think of when i wrote it was "GREEDO DID NOt SHOOT FIRST" lol. And I would love to be able to take credit for the reduction of mistakes but i owe that to CeeCee she has been doin a great job as my beta. Well with that said i will get the fix ready thank ya again Darlin :)