This was just hysterical. I LOVE your Deadpool, but you knew that. I just finished reading Deadpool: What Happens in Vegas, and this was definitely in character.

The punctuation was all over the place. At first I didn't realize that you were breaking the fourth wall with the parentheses and making y ou, the narrator, the protagonist for this chapter. Might help to use italic formatting next time, but this was still a hoot. I love this chapter, I love this story. Thanks so much for updating. The mental image of Deadpool trying to pick up on Storm makes me bust a gut. Rogue would squash him like a bug.

I've said it before, but your Wade is one of the best I've heard! (don't let him hear that) You write him so well, I love it. I hope your writers' block gets better, but if all you can write is more Wade, you won't hear me complain heh.

PS, tell Wade to shut up, learning Doth'raki would be /awesome/