Date: 04-17-14 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Had to re-read some work from one of my favorite authors and just needed to say you are sooo sorely missed. Your work is amazing finished or not, such a joy to read.
Date: 08-18-07 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
I love this story. You're doing a marvelous job. I adore the relationship you created between Ororo and Scott. I can't remember reading a Fan.Fiction where Scott seemed Human rather then just .. Robotic with a stick up his Ass.
I'm interested to see what you plan on doing with Ororo and Logan, especially with the whole sibling-like relationship between Ororo and Scott. I'm curious how He'd Handle it.
I hate how you made me like Jean in this. She was nice, sweet and Innocent. I have never read a ROLO where that was the case with Jean.
All in all, I love this, and I do hope that you update it soon, because I'm dying for more.
Date: 07-20-07 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Gainee... I love you. You brighten up my day by delivering these wonderful chapters. I've been behind but now I'm catching up and I must say I look forward to the next chapters!
Date: 07-07-07 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Great story. I hope you update soon. :)
Date: 06-27-07 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Ah chica this is wonderful. I've been meaning to write a review for the first two chapters when if first came out but i was too busy.
As always to deilver a story that is very beileveable. I love the relantionship in the story.
Muy Bien ; )
( excuse the spanish, it was my last final and i have spanish stuck in my head )
Date: 06-27-07 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Crap half my post was gone.
Ugh, anyway I wanted to also say I loved the way you're writing Storm. She's easy going and fun loving and just someone so different than she's written in the comics and in some fanfics. What's surprising is that I don't see it OOC. It's very Storm like, but something i think people rarely touch on.
As we saw in the tickling of Jean or my favorite moment, the priceless scene between Storm/Wolverine and her munching off his plate. It's endearing and I hope you know you've created a precedence that will make us want to see Storm/Wolvie sharing food together. I like her pilfering from his plate. I'd love to see her stealing the sheets after a night of hot steamy love making with Wolvie...he'd just be like this woman pilfers everything, my food, my sheets, my shirts....shit, even my heart. ^_^
Not to mention I also like how easy going she is with Wolverine. She's completely unafraid of his growl or bark and I can't wait to see the progression of their friendship to devotion to love. It will be a very epic story to see in the making. They just have this silly intensity about them that just appeals to me, in this fic.
I also like how Storm is a hugger here. She just seems to love holding people and I can't wait to see her do that with Wolverine. Going beyond the bark, bite, and just going straight for the man inside....I'd love to see him purr. Hahaha, strange thought of Storm making Wolverine purr and mew with Scott watching on. Scott would never let Wolverine live that down. The ladies all around would swoon. You know you've tamed the wolf when you've made him purr like a kitten. ^_^
All in all great story and I love what you're doing. Keep it coming.
Date: 06-27-07 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Loved it. Oh, wow, you actually made me like Jean. I hate you for doing that to me. I'm so used to not liking her that actually liking her is making me all wonky. I love Scott, and I love the Scott/Ro/Jean friendship. That is just too sweet.
Ooh, and finally Wolverine is pursuing a single, available, gorgeous, and smart woman. I can't wait to see those two together...they'll just be trouble. Their like the anti-Scott/Jean pairing. Totally rebellious and radical, completely untamed.
I love how you're writing Wolverine and Storm's relationship. It's building up to being a wickedly naughty relationship. She seems like she'll fight, but then Wolverine doesn't look like he'll be going anywhere any time soon. I hope we'll get a scene where Storm gets them both arrested. Her starting a brawl at Harry's...wow, Wolverine would be like "You had me at the first punch. You had me at the first punch."
Date: 06-27-07 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Whoot! Whoot!
I'm very interested in this story Very interested. lol! Keep it commin'!
Date: 06-27-07 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
lol I love the last scene between 'Ro and Logan. And the scene with the X-Trio was adorable.
Date: 06-26-07 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Burnz does the world's cheesiest bastardized Oliver Twist impersonation "Please Gainee may we have some more?" I lurve this fic.
Date: 06-26-07 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
love it so much! can't wait for more!
Date: 06-26-07 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
Scott having fun, how often do you see that - thanks for this visual, he was kinda cute.
Breakfast in bed - wonderful; Logan getting the sizzle every time he touched Ro - Priceless!
Can't wait for the next chapter of life and love at Mutant High.
Date: 06-26-07 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
I already love this. That breakfast and discussion I could definitely picture and hear. Ororo reciting Marie's message was cute.
Date: 06-26-07 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Three: Perilous Riptide
aside from the massive ewwwies I got from her eating off his plate this was a nice chapter. :D I miss Jean too at times. But not at teh hands of Marvel. I'd trust her to Famke's lovely hands though. ;)