Date: 10-10-07 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter Four: Complications
This is how the movie should've went instead of Logan sniffing after Jean like a bitch in heat.
Keep it coming
Date: 10-01-07 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter Four: Complications
Ohhh, I'm loving this! The relationship between Ro, Scott and Jean is great. You can easily see they grew up together like siblings.
I'm glad Ro told Logan that she's not with Scott LOL, even though it was fun, heh. It's soooo refreshing to see Logan notice Jean but taking no further interest in her, being fascinated by Ro instead :)
Can't wait to see what's next!
Next time I watch the movie I'll definitely be thinking of this story to fill the "missing scenes" :D Keep 'em comin'!
Date: 09-30-07 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Four: Complications
his horse was named Holly? Should I be flattered or insulted, lol.
Date: 09-29-07 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Four: Complications
Oh man,
That was intense. First the Scott lecture then the runaway excitement. I am waiting to see what the twist from the movieverse gives. Good chapter.
Date: 09-29-07 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Four: Complications
I enjoy this because it filled the movie gaps pretty seamlessly. Ororo's injury makes sense, since most people don't just easily skip along easy as you please after being strangled and jacked up off their feet by someone with claws. I also enjoyed the visual of Ororo and Scott on the horses and the contrasts between the two. Keep it coming. It's nice to see you writing again.
Date: 09-29-07 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter Four: Complications
I love you version. It's so much better than the movie!!!