his horse was named Holly? Should I be flattered or insulted, lol.

I enjoy this because it filled the movie gaps pretty seamlessly. Ororo's injury makes sense, since most people don't just easily skip along easy as you please after being strangled and jacked up off their feet by someone with claws. I also enjoyed the visual of Ororo and Scott on the horses and the contrasts between the two. Keep it coming. It's nice to see you writing again.

I love this story. You're doing a marvelous job. I adore the relationship you created between Ororo and Scott. I can't remember reading a Fan.Fiction where Scott seemed Human rather then just .. Robotic with a stick up his Ass.

I'm interested to see what you plan on doing with Ororo and Logan, especially with the whole sibling-like relationship between Ororo and Scott. I'm curious how He'd Handle it.

I hate how you made me like Jean in this. She was nice, sweet and Innocent. I have never read a ROLO where that was the case with Jean.

All in all, I love this, and I do hope that you update it soon, because I'm dying for more.

Great story. I hope you update soon. :)

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Ugh, anyway I wanted to also say I loved the way you're writing Storm. She's easy going and fun loving and just someone so different than she's written in the comics and in some fanfics. What's surprising is that I don't see it OOC. It's very Storm like, but something i think people rarely touch on.

As we saw in the tickling of Jean or my favorite moment, the priceless scene between Storm/Wolverine and her munching off his plate. It's endearing and I hope you know you've created a precedence that will make us want to see Storm/Wolvie sharing food together. I like her pilfering from his plate. I'd love to see her stealing the sheets after a night of hot steamy love making with Wolvie...he'd just be like this woman pilfers everything, my food, my sheets, my shirts....shit, even my heart. ^_^

Not to mention I also like how easy going she is with Wolverine. She's completely unafraid of his growl or bark and I can't wait to see the progression of their friendship to devotion to love. It will be a very epic story to see in the making. They just have this silly intensity about them that just appeals to me, in this fic.

I also like how Storm is a hugger here. She just seems to love holding people and I can't wait to see her do that with Wolverine. Going beyond the bark, bite, and just going straight for the man inside....I'd love to see him purr. Hahaha, strange thought of Storm making Wolverine purr and mew with Scott watching on. Scott would never let Wolverine live that down. The ladies all around would swoon. You know you've tamed the wolf when you've made him purr like a kitten. ^_^

All in all great story and I love what you're doing. Keep it coming.

Whoot! Whoot!

I'm very interested in this story Very interested. lol! Keep it commin'!

Burnz does the world's cheesiest bastardized Oliver Twist impersonation "Please Gainee may we have some more?" I lurve this fic.