First off: Awwwwwwwwwwww **HUGGLES** a dedication!! **swoons** Second, I love this! LOVE I tell ya! It's everything that I thought you would make it!

Some of the best moments thus far:
"Wonder Twins" OMG **dies laughing**
The fact that Scott gets a voice--at all. **loves** You know me and my recent Scooter fetish, so this is good.
Ororo's origin backstory **thumbs way way up**
“An excellent choice, my dear.” Charles still wore his crisp linen suit, beckoning her closer to sit in his private sitting room. “And the man?”

“Jean has him,” Storm answered. All I could think was "For now" LMAO

Brilliant, chica. This is now my current favorite story! Yup, it eclipsed Shatter. w00t!!

So vabi loves this. I really do. You know I'm pro Cycke. Do me at least one favor?! When writing this, don't kill off Cycke, please don't. I cried when he died in X-3, I can't handle it again. Jean can go, Cycke deserves better. Maybe bring in Polaris or someone cool like Psylocke for him, to spice things up. But death to Jean...and anyone else who hurts Cycke.

Now as for the Storm/Cycke relationship. LOVE IT!! Woohoo!! I adored them in this. Please continue on with this. If there is a relationship between Storm/Wolvie early on where she becomes his friend---I really want Cycke to have a big brother moment and warn Wolvie about what he could do. Maybe even a bit of jealousy would be sweet. Hahaha!! It would be teh cool if Wolvie thinks something is going on between Cycke and Storm. I'd be giggling away...see how I notably ignored anything that deals with Jean Grey. Death to Jean.

Question, is Rogue a teenager here or is she like 10. I'm asking because of the way Kitty and Storm talked to her like she's a baby. I realize they're trying to be soothing and protective, but they made Rogue appear like she's 10-13, well much younger than Kitty.

I can't wait for the Storm/Wolvie moment, that will be utter class. Great start to this fic and I'm totally loving it. Please tell you'll post chapter 2 tomorrow. I really want to see this fic.

Oh, can we expect an almost epic like story with lots of yum yum fun between STorm/Wolvie?! Any chance of Angel/Kitty in the future... No no no, make it Gambit/Kitty. Wow, what a pairing. It would be crazy, I'll give you a kiss and promise to review every single chapter if you give me Gambit/Kitty. Oh, and that would be related to S2 I think remember Gambits name was on that computer file that Mystique stole from that office. Or was that S1. Anyway Gambit/Kitty!! Gambit/Kitty!! He's just the quintessential bad boy and she's like the quintessential good girl. Not really should mix, but probably when they do it's fire. With her brains and his looks those kids would be spiffy.

I know, I know. The story hasn't begun and I'm throwing my wishes on top of it. And no worries if no Gambit/Kitty, I'll still read and review. I'm really really interested in this remake. Since I love your other stories which have a strong and powerful plot, I already know that this will be just as strong and powerful. With angst, love, friendship, and just really great full indepth plot and actionized fun in writing. Great stuff and I'm glad you're putting this out there for people.

**Subliminal message: Gambit/Kitty (G/K). Death to Jean. Long live Scott (he needs a new lady). : Subliminal message over**

^_^ Great stuff.

I'm liking this rewrite of X1! Thanks so much for the AN; when I finished, I thought this wouldn't be RoLo. lol! I read nothing but RoLo nowadays! I love your work, so, as usual, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)