Date: 06-29-07 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
I had a grin on the my face as always. You have combined three of my favoritefemale characters, Alison, Betsy and Ororo.
And i just love it.
I love how in the first chapter you touch on different elements. More to come i hope.
Date: 06-29-07 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
tease. i wish i wasn't sick and half asleep. you deserve a better review.
but, you're a tease. (that means i likes it)
Date: 06-29-07 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
“Wow. Aren’t you Mr. Tall, Dark, and Can I have a spanking?”
love that line lol I'm using that in an away message, with a link back to you.
Date: 06-28-07 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Yes! A blue eyed Storm (which I always love) who is a wild girl. Yes! It is definitely love at first read. :) Fun!
Date: 06-28-07 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
I dig it :)
Date: 06-28-07 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Snog. LOL. Bloody brill, lovie. Bloody brill. And I have to do the happy dance of giddyiness that Betsy and Ali made it as a couple. Somehow I knoew that would work! :D More of this fun stuff soon I hope/
Date: 06-28-07 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON..................
Date: 06-28-07 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
I always love your stories...this one is no exception.
No complaints about the characters, I like what you've done with them. Bets and Ali, great couple. I still don't like Jean but Scott and 'Ro, great!
Date: 06-28-07 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
man, that was priceless.
"Bite your tongue!"
"Scottie-Bear!"
"Mr. Tall, Dark, and I Need a Spanking."
Man. I wish I could think up a really good, silly scene like that with so much great dialogue and inner monologue at the same time. Betsy and Ali? Great slashy pairing. Never would have slash-paired Ali with anyone, but with this interpretation of Betsy, she fits. Love the pic, too, by the way.