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Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-08 - 11:36 pm Title: The First Move

This is a new turn for Rolo, the ‘end-of-the-world’ type of fantasy that we haven’t seen outside the their usual X-Men lifestyle. I’m enjoying the ride your giving us with this story, every time I read it, it reminds me of a show I loved, Carnivàle. In fact it reminds me very much of Constantine….
The detail and dark feeling to this story is grabbing, in the way that makes you want more of the story. It is the type of story that is real to everyday people in ‘reality,’ with a touch of paranormal effect that you can’t shake off. I hope you continue to update, waiting for this chapter was well worth the wait.

Author's Response: Carnivale was also a favorite show of mine and i did want a bit of its feel for this . Ii am very glad you enjoy it :)

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-08 - 09:58 pm Title: The First Move

Glad to see this updated, it's one of my faves :)

Author's Response: thank you very much i am glad your are digging it :)

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-08 - 04:55 pm Title: Gathering Darkness

this is by far one of the most original stories I've read here. please update.

Author's Response: thank you very much i am trying my best to make it as orignal as possible i am glad you like it :)

Reviewer: angel24buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-07 - 05:42 pm Title: Gathering Darkness

This story starts off dark, but I am intrigue to see what's going to happen next. You have me hook with this one. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you and i shall :)

Reviewer: fel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-09-07 - 02:14 pm Title: Gathering Darkness

hope there more to come. is this fanfic influenced by stair way to heaven: crow? loving the how the plot is devloping.

Author's Response: thank you very much i am glad you like, I have to say thoguh that while i did love the First crow, this story did not come form the crow, there are some simalarites no dbout though but they shall be explained in due time thank you though and there is more ot come

Reviewer: Cecelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-08-07 - 03:32 am Title: Gathering Darkness

I love the Crow overtones in this. I know Pale Rider was your inspiration for this, but the imagery brings that classic Brandon Lee character to mind.

It's dark and satisfying. I'll be happy with anything you update, buddy.

Author's Response: thanks Cee The Brandon Lee Crow was my favorite the only one i thought did true justice to the charecter and while not a direct influance, there are bits and pieces that i used form thatGlad ya liked :)

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-08-07 - 12:05 am Title: Gathering Darkness

Good job of making the setting for all of the players. I am anxious to see where this leads.

Author's Response: Thank you very much i still have one or two more to get into the light but then its show time lol thak you very much :)

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-07 - 02:37 pm Title: Gathering Darkness

that does not sound good at all. I like the poem (or poem verse) at the beginning. I'm not sure why.

Ororo's dreams sound horrible. I hope they get better, but I have a feeling they won't.

Author's Response: I am afriad that dark days lie ahead for Ro and not much is going to get better for her

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-07 - 12:16 am Title: Gathering Darkness

Once again, I'm loving this story. I'm so looking forward to finding out what the hell the yellow-eyed things are!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much and soon you shall know :)

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-07 - 07:52 pm Title: The Breaking

this reminds me a lot of the parts of The Crow that I've seen. It's creepy and usually I don't like stuff like this, but I have to say I like this a lot. Is Logan watching out for 'Ro through the crows or is she next? And is this going to be a RoLo or just have some Ororo/Logan moments like in this chapter?

I have no idea why I even asked those questions lol

Author's Response: lol aint never nothing wrong with askin questions :) but for now i think i will just say Wait and see :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-07-07 - 11:21 am Title: The Breaking

Now those two first chapters gave me the creeps. Creppy alley, creppy sheriff... and those two guys! *shudders* Call me in, I'm hooked :D *likes creepy*
I'm so glad Ro got saved in time! But there's still that creppy sheriff, eeek. I wouldn't want to live in a house deep in the woods with a guy like that running around...
Can't wait to read more of this! :)

Author's Response: lol glad ya liked it and you havent seen the full extent of the creepy yet

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 07:55 am Title: The Breaking

This reminded me of Ghost Rider a bit. Again, very original, very intriguing. This is fun, albeit a bit creepy. Keeps us guessing. I love the banter between Jubes and Ororo.

Author's Response: Thanks Darlin hope it hooks ya :)

Reviewer: Spaceroses Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 02:04 am Title: The Breaking

Eeee....creepy.....At least Logan (I think it's Logan) saved Storm ^^ -inner Rolo shipper grins crazily- Can't wait to see where this is going...methinks Strangers got some secrets up his sleeve.....

Author's Response: Oh yes he does indeed :) thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Stormiegirl1999 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 01:23 am Title: The Breaking

Wow!

I don't know what to say except...DAYUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol Thank you :)

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:47 pm Title: The Breaking

Nicely put together. I liked it. :)

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

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