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Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:36 pm Title: The Breaking

Oh shit! I'm extremely diggin this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much hope you like the rest

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:01 pm Title: The Breaking

Glad to see the tags took this time!

I'm still getting a kick out of Jubes, since she is pretty believable and has some great lines. The use of the crows is excellent, gives this a "The Raven" feel a la Edgar Allen Poe, or even the movie "The Crow." Good stuff. It's ironic that Ro had a bad feeling about the alley before, and that's where Logan showed up in this chapter.

Author's Response: Nevermore right ? lol Thanks Cee :)

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-07 - 06:02 pm Title: The Foruth Seal

OHHHH...I likey..can't wait to see what develops next!

Author's Response: it will be coming soon :)

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-07 - 03:23 pm Title: The Foruth Seal

I love it!

Author's Response: thank you glad you did :)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-07 - 05:38 am Title: The Foruth Seal

And that's it? What a way to leave us hanging buddy! But again, it's different, fresh and I'm longing for the next chapter. I only wish I had your creative juices.

Author's Response: That is a huge complement Darlin thank you very much i have to say though that while my brain might go hyperacitive with ideas some time you have the really heart grabbing ones that i wait for in each one of your updates. Anyway i am really glad ya liked the chap thanks a ton :)

Reviewer: Spaceroses Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-07 - 08:18 pm Title: The Foruth Seal

Oooh...interesting. Frankly I like how you protrayed the small town, and how everyone is "buddy buddy" in them. That's how most towns like that are...not the kind of places you really want to live in. For a few minutes I thought Logan was the sheriff...glad he isn't. Cant wait for another chapter...update!

Author's Response: My inspiration for this town came from where i used to live acutally. Even the house that Ro and Jubes live in is kind of like my old one, off away from a small town, except mine was on the bayou lol. Thank ya for reading it i hope i can hook ya with coming chapters :)

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-07 - 04:17 pm Title: The Foruth Seal

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Thank ya much and i will get it out soon :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-07 - 04:03 pm Title: The Foruth Seal

Something looks like it didn't take with the bold/centered tags...weird.

Other than that, this looks great. Can't wait to see what else you do with this story. I know you'll do a great job of writing Logan. Storm and Jubes are already very likable. Don't see them paired as sisters in any other fics I have read. The little spark between 'Ro and Nate looks like it will be interesting to read, too.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee I dont know what happend with the bod and center but no biggie :) I hope i do a good job with logan in this it will be a tad different incarnation

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-07 - 01:47 am Title: The Foruth Seal

Very creepy, and I Iove it.

Author's Response: Thank ya much i was goin for a nice creepy mood :)

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