[Report This]Date: 08-31-07 - 04:13 pm Title: Overcast Days
*tries to find his voice.... it's stuck somewhere underneath the huge lump in his throat*
As a firefighter in real life I've been to hundreds of these types of scenes, but never let myself think that muh about what the victims might've been thinkin' or feelin' as it happened.... *takes a deep breath.... an' takes a break*
I love your writer's voice, Cee. Ya' know yer one o' my favorite authors. You do know that right? *nods* Definitely, you are. Great job, very realistic in every aspect of this story so far. Very well done. -- W6C
Author's Response: I've often times wondered what your profession was like in that regard. So indeed, thanks for letting me have this kind of feedback, W6C. I enjoy these compliments from you, since I love the stories you have posted here and on AFF.net, so I bow to one of the masters!
[Report This]Date: 08-08-07 - 10:47 am Title: Overcast Days
So, I started reading this, and stopped. I just couldn't get through the whole Jean/Logan stuff. I really don't know where this is going, but I'm going along with it. I must admit that I do like your writing style, and the flow is very good. Hopefully there will be some ROLO in the near future.
Author's Response: There isn't too much "Jean" stuff after chapter two. She isn't a central character in this story, and there is some RoLo, but it will be slowly paced so they can get to know each other.
[Report This]Date: 08-08-07 - 12:07 am Title: Overcast Days
ok... so I still don't like Jean in general, but I didn't hate her in this... so I guess I'm a little sad that she died like that. will Gayle be okay?
Author's Response: I'll let you know by next chapter. Thanks for visiting, Tiger.
[Report This]Date: 08-06-07 - 03:10 pm Title: Overcast Days
i love what you did with this chapter! the ending made me gasp but hey; what's life without a little excitement? great job and update soon! you have me jumping at your stories when i log in! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter! I'm trying to go in different directions with some of my stuff. Sometimes mine are all about Hello Kitty accessories and Superfriends coffee mugs, and lots of girl talk. Good to see you, kiddo.
[Report This]Date: 08-06-07 - 12:02 am Title: Overcast Days
Great job Cee you did just fine, ya got everything down pact so dont worry none about it. That was a gut wrencher there at the end made me hitch a breath. i am diggin it as always and if ya need anymore info ya know ya can always ask
Author's Response: Thank you once again, so very much. I might knock on your door for more input. I appreciated it a lot. It's always hard to write a career you don't actually have into a piece of fiction and make it convincing. Ororo will be easier, since my mom was a nurse, and a darned good one. You can breathe now, friend. At least for the moment. Next chapter might be hard to imagine as folks read it. And hard for me to imagine as I write it. Thanks for the feedback, too.
[Report This]Date: 08-06-07 - 12:00 am Title: Overcast Days
One of my favorite things about your stories is that you bring in so many characters and actually write for them. I'm enjoying the pacing of this fic. When you jump back and forth b/t those 10 years, you make me want to know what happened.
I can't even imagine Logan's reaction when he learns of whats happened to Jean and his little girl.
I'm eager to see how this tale unfolds. More please and thank you!
Author's Response: Jumping back and forth over a decade was a risky choice for me. I hate confusing people, and I was afraid that was what I would end up doing. I wanted to show a few parallels between their characters and some of their experiences that would eventually draw them together, in effect, when they were both ready. Logan's reaction will be draining to write. I get absorbed when I write scenes involving mourning or personal tragedy. Poor Logan...thanks again for reading, Natira.
[Report This]Date: 08-05-07 - 01:02 pm Title: Overcast Days
Each scene in this is full of vivid imagery and realistic dialog and emotions. The end scene was chaotic and traumatic and I can only imagine how poignant you'll make the aftermath. I'll be looking for more of this fic. **claps and whistles**
Author's Response: Poignant? You expect POIGNANCY from me, Hobbins? Me, the creator of angst, cheesy sound effects, fart jokes and clothing malfunctions? Okey dokey!!! (giggle) Thanks as always for the feedback. I hope you like the updates, whenever I get up off my keister to write more.
[Report This]Date: 08-05-07 - 06:17 am Title: Overcast Days
OMG!!! That was so realistic. My heart stopped.
Author's Response: I'm glad it seemed genuine to you. I didn't want to beat the details to death, since it was a death scene of a protagonist in this story and of a child. Thanks for reading, 'Queen.
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