Oohhh, I'm intrigued!
Can't wait to see where this psi-scream came from. And what's with Marie's headaches? The cure a poison? OMG... that's creepy.
Love the familiarity between Ororo and Alex, goofing around in the kitchen like children, making Logan feel like the only adult in the room. LOL
MMmhhh, Sabretooth. *drools* Can't wait to see him in action! :D
I'm curious to see where you are going with this.

Freedom Force ( the comic ) was a totally disaster. It was a stupid plan that should have never been thought of.

I love everything about this story. The repartee going on between Alex and Storm was hilarious. Ever since the second chapter I knew Alex was going to be an more entertaining character.

Is there going to be history between Ororo and Pietro? Or maybe our Captain America will be a distraction for our weather witch?
Great story. Can't wait to read more.

OMIGOSH! This last chapter was so much fun. I will admit, and it’s no secret, that I hate the movie and most movie fics but I’m really enjoying this now. Of course your movie fics are usually very good so I shouldn’t be surprised. Well, Alex and Ororo are perfect together, like brother and sister. I just love the family camaraderie that you’ve established. Alex actually reminds me of Bobby which is one of my complaints about the movie, making Bobby into an entirely different character for what purpose? E-gad! But I won’t go off on that or the other 100 reasons why the movie sucked, the last movie in particular.

Okay, sorry you can see how the movies affect me, just can’t help it. So, your story is perfectly delightful. I can’t wait to see what develops. I felt possibly there might be hints of an Ororo Pietro hookup in the past and of course there was mention of Forge so I’m very curious to see what you have up your sleeve. And I really enjoyed how you have Steve and Val in this even though they weren’t shown. I love that your stories incorporate other Marvel characters. They all live in the same universe so it’s only logical to use them and no need to make up pretend characters. I hate original characters usually, hate, hate, hate them. Which reminds me, I’m not familiar with Laura Dean at all, is she an OC or someone from Marvel?

I loved this chapter because it was full of great character references to both Freedom Force and the old Brotherhood. Alex is going to be one of my favorite characters in this story, I can already tell. I love the banter among them over that ice cream, it was priceless, very true, and I can picture Ororo making faces at him like "boy, you better back up and get those cottonpickin' fingers outta my Chocolate Delight, or there's gonna be trouble up in this piece!" Get him, 'Ro! Five second rule...hee hee hee.

Logan is strong and no-nonsense here, playing straight man in a silly scene. That last paragraph just gives a girl chills about what good stuff I know you're brewing in that brilliant head, Dimples.

They've done it now. Avalanche, Mystique, Sabretooth, and Toad all on the same team. And damn Avalanche for threatening to destroy my home state. I think I'm with Logan on this one. They are asking for trouble. However, this is your story, and I'm never sure what to expect from you on the story front. They might actually turn out into an awesome team. I say that because on second reading I see you mentioned Sabretooth is taking care of a purple-skinned girl from Miami. Sounds an awful lot like an exiled teleporter. Going on that theory the small hints in the story pointing to where this is going is all starting to make sense.