Date: 01-21-08 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
this is so sweet...and sad. about half way through this chapter i hopped over to my netflix acct and saved "things we lost in the fire".
Date: 10-28-07 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
How is it that in one chapter you have me in tears? NOT COOL!! But beautifully well written as always :)
Date: 10-20-07 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
You're killing me, gainee. You should just go ahead and write a Scott/Ororo story. I would definitely read it.
This was a great beginning. I can't believe Scott is dead before we even got to know him. My heart broke when I read the boys reaction at being told their father had died. That was a killer.
Who did Logan cheat with or was it vice versa?
Post soon.
Date: 10-15-07 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
It is a little sad, but I like this story. We rarely see Ororo and Scott as lovers. I like this comibination, although we are starting off with him dead. Please keep it coming.
Date: 10-14-07 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Love it can't wait or an update..
Date: 10-13-07 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Damn. Poor Ro. I'm so sorry for her and the kids. Her whole world just collapsed. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm also looking forward to more background info on Scott/Ro and Scott and Logan.
Date: 10-13-07 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Dang! I can barely see through the tears.
Rolletti
Date: 10-13-07 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Date: 10-12-07 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
oddly im likeing this story i know its sad and all but when even said goodbye to scott i couldnt help but laugh hope theres more
Sooner rather then later
Date: 10-12-07 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Sheesh! That is rough, what a sad scenario. Infidelity and a long standing friendship...I look forward to the promised back-story on that. :) Good start.
Date: 10-12-07 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
I nearly cried reading this, but I can't wait to see what happens. I can't wait to see the movie (it's not out in the UK, darn it!) it looks so good!
Date: 10-12-07 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter One: All Fall Down
Dang, Gainee!
The mood you set with the burned dinner was perfect, since I can visualize it, and you can feel right along with Ro her unease as she turns on the TV. The exposition is different than your usual writing. I enjoyed this. The image of the uncut yard works, too, since it's like this metaphor of how everything fell apart when Scott died. Well done.