Date: 06-23-14 - 08:49 am Title: Not One for Swiss Miss
Love it!!! Please update soon!!
Date: 11-11-11 - 09:57 am Title: Not One for Swiss Miss
Finish. This. Now. :)
Author's Response: Trying. I promise. :)
Date: 05-15-09 - 10:31 pm Title: Not One for Swiss Miss
I read chapters 13 – 15 while at work and actually couldn’t stop reading. Do you know I copied and pasted the chapters and saved it as a document and chapters 13 – 20 total 218 pages?! I thought, good grief I can’t read all this but I breezed through eight chapters. Well, a few observations:
I do not like Ali like you like her and Ororo isn’t quite the Storm we know but the more human Storm you always write, as if she’s just a normal woman off the street living her ho hum life just like any woman but it all works. I do sometimes wish I could wash her mouth out with soap though. But I've been absolutely captivated by the stalker and the changes in Logan!
A little off topic but I have to say this, old fashion cocoa yes! That’s the only way to make it unless you actually melt chocolate chips/bittersweet chocolate for a thicker version a la Italian chocolate which is absolutely to die for. I know it's in another chapter but I love that Logan knew how to make it.
Author's Response: Ali isn't even one of my favorite females in Marvel, but she's a mellow character, often silly, and to me, a good foil to Ororo when she's dealing with hangups. I can't write her like Windy writes Ali, namely in her Ultimate incarnation. When I think of her, I think of how Claremont wrote her, when she was still with Longshot in the Outback, just kind of ditzy, image-obsessed, silly and warm. I'll keep her language in check more in the future *makes big puppy eyes*. And yeah, I got so used to making my cocoa that way, that when Juice finally brought home some generic instant cocoa, that stuff tasted like water.
Date: 10-25-07 - 12:56 am Title: Not One for Swiss Miss
Poor cat, can you blame it. Now I'm in the mood for some hot chocolate. mmmm
I can so relate to the bleary eyes, trying to make it to my bed from reading all of the fics on the Realm. LOL
Rolletti
Author's Response: Some nights I almost nod off at my keyboard. I love hot chocolate, and I've been guzzling it since the weather started to cool off. Glad you had time to read.
Date: 10-14-07 - 09:14 pm Title: Not One for Swiss Miss
Can't wait to read more *runs to the next chappy* ^_^
Author's Response: :-) There's a little more!