OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!! Wow you kow how to bring them together, huh! That was ...creepy and heroic and creepy again. Woah, who's on the step? Is it Forge? He needs to turn around before HE get his neck bitten too. LOL

Love it,
Rolletti
PS What's up with the security code? grrrrr

Author's Response: A couple of people asked if it was Forge. He's not really in this much, perhaps just a brief cameo. But it will be someone who thinks they know Ororo, as opposed to someone she actually knows. I'm not too fond of the code, either. C'est la vie.

Whoa, for a sec I thought Logan was going in for the kill when he went for that guy's throat. I'm glad he gave him the shock of his life instead, heh :D
Loved Ro ramming herself into his nose, too. I was like "YES!" :D
So Pietro is the one who got Logan's position... Ali seems pretty interested in him. Go take him for yourself, girl. Leave Ro alone! LOL ;D
"He'd have to fix that." Gads, who's "he"? He sounds a bit crazed... Is it Forge? CREEPY!!!

Author's Response: hee hee! I know. Old Pietro showed up again. That boy's a piece of work. The guy lurking around the corner hasn't been identified yet, but it's not Forge. He won't have much of a role in this except to provide a yard stick that Ororo will use to compare pretty much any man interested in her going forward. Thanks for the review, Steph. Glad you liked the bonk on the nose, I like writing those.

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.


Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. There will be more soon. Thank you!