Reviews For Eyes in the Dark
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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-15-09 - 02:25 am Title: Recollections

I'm very, very intrigued with this. Love the tiny flashback thoughts/moments. And some of the lines are fantastic, hair spun from moonlight - egad who's the stalker? And
"She extinguished the bedroom light. She might as well have turned off the sun." So nice.

Author's Response: hee! thanks. glad you like my metaphors, despite that I tended to beat people over the head with them in this story, in particular. but it's been fun to write.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-07 - 10:54 am Title: Recollections

*shudders* There's that stalker guy again. I wonder if he's standing in line, too. I bet he's close... ewww, that's creeping me out. LOL
But, oooohhhh, Logan and Ro met again. :D More please! Where do they go from here?

Author's Response: I should have had him standing in line...this is why you should write, too, Steph! That would have been great. But anyway, they will continue to meet. It won't be easy between them.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-23-07 - 11:26 pm Title: Recollections

aww... that was so cute how the dog stood up! I like Logan as a werewolf.

And they should go out to lunch and have a chat! Was it her heartbeat that he picked out to listen to?

Author's Response: Yes, it was her heartbeat. That might be a recurring theme. Lunch? Possibly dinner. As long as she isn't his dinner...muahahahaha.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-23-07 - 11:17 pm Title: Recollections

Wow. This chapter was really good! I look forward to your next update!!


Author's Response: Thanks!

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