[Report This]Date: 05-15-09 - 10:37 pm Title: The Better to See You With
Aren’t Pietro and Lorna related? Or is that just a sometimes they aren’t sometimes they are comic book thing when they retcon? But then I guess you’re going with the idea that none of them are related, not even Magnus and Pietro, eh? I’m liking the easy pace you’ve set for RoLo but chomping at the bit for answers about the obsessed fan.
Author's Response: I am keeping them unrelated. I threw Wanda in there, too, if you haven't seen her yet, along with her magically conjured twin boys. Magnus was in there to show the kind of businessman that Pietro would aspire to be, if he had kept moving up in his company.
[Report This]Date: 12-31-07 - 05:11 am Title: The Better to See You With
Of course I got to the end and screamed. You are such a tease. MORE, MORE, MORE!
This is such a great story, I just can't wait to see what happens next.
Rolletti
Author's Response: More to come! Teases, screams, and more of my usual abusive use of metaphors and cliffhangers. I promise!!!
[Report This]Date: 12-30-07 - 11:03 am Title: The Better to See You With
Heehee, Pietro. *sticks out tongue*
Argh, Ali! Why did you tell him where Ro went off to. She surely wasn't in her right mind, and I blame Remy for that, heh.
Loved how they were fighting over her laptop; that was cute. I totally was on Ro's side here, heh. Her reaction was absolutely understandable. I hate people reading over my shoulder or watching me draw even. *shudders*
“Be glad Thumper and Flower ain’t swimmin’ in the sauce with him.” Bwahahahaha! *snorts*
The last paragraph sounded way too peaceful to me, gave me a feeling of foreboding. Something's about to happen, right? Or is it just me being paranoid? LOL ;D
Author's Response: I had fun writing those two scenes with the laptop and the stew. Ororo is a city slicker and a workaholic. Foreboding? Who, me??? Now would I use evil foreshadowing? ...*yes*
[Report This]Date: 12-29-07 - 03:07 pm Title: The Better to See You With
Well aren't they getting along nicely in the cabin in the woods? Lorna an Pietro canned like tuna...nice. I guess Ali being distracted is what lead her to be so generous with info instead of just saying her buddy was out of town. Good thing she didn't have the address! I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: getting along nicely...whoa, nelly, aren't they?? I almost sent Pietro into the woods, since that would've left him more vulnerable if he and Logan got into it, since Logan knows the lay of the land. But I wanted 'Tro to see Logan comfortable with 'Ro instead, in her own setting, where he could see that she trusted Logan enough to basically let him live with her, and pretty soon after they met!!! More soon, Burnz!
[Report This]Date: 12-29-07 - 02:13 pm Title: The Better to See You With
hmm... a taurus huh? I loved all the RoLo moments in this Cee! So sweet!
and Pietro is going to start causing trouble isn't he? Is he the stalker? I glad he was fired!
Author's Response: yeah, a Taurus! A nice, stubborn sign. My husband is one, too. Pietro has trouble written all over him. And the stalker is just on the periphery causing trouble. He isn't the real villain.... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12-28-07 - 05:28 pm Title: The Better to See You With
Love it! Can't wait to read more! ::hint hint:: :D
Author's Response: heh. Oh, there will be more! muahahaha... Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12-28-07 - 05:19 am Title: The Better to See You With
and another awesome chapter! i'm really enjoying the way you are developing their relationship. and take that! Pietro!
Author's Response: Yeah, Pietro, take that!!! I'm glad you enjoyed that.
[Report This]Date: 12-27-07 - 10:33 pm Title: The Better to See You With
an outstanding chapter, as usual. i was REALLY hoping you'd choose to update this one after the holidays, as it's definitely one of my favorites (though i AM hankering for a new chapter of 'abandon' and your new chick-lit one). so excited to see the chemistry between 'ro and logan building, and also excited to see the unfolding of the plot with pietro. above all, though, you've got SUCH a way with words. your prose is always so tightly written, and your phrasing always sends a shiver down my spine. out of everything, this one line jumped out at me: "His eyes were narrow and a flinty gray that only hosted warmth when he laughed." don't ask why, but definitely one of my favorite lines. anyway, with that said, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Wow! I'm flattered when I get feedback not only on the chapter, but on certain lines that grab people. Thanks for reviewing this, it made my day, and it makes me want to update this pretty soon as time allows! Abandon is in the queue, it's been on my mind. And the chick lit one is still on my plate, too! I have fun writing that one.
[Report This]Date: 12-27-07 - 10:15 pm Title: The Better to See You With
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, Dragon! I'll get to it...eventually!
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