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Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-08 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Four

This was a nice filler issue, you always make sure to cover your basis. From Logan's gulit for hurting Ororo, to the mysterious device In the back of her head. I wish I could write more but life keeps me busy. This looking good, update Stand by Me! I'm enjoying that story as much as this one. : )

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-08 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Four

SNAP! Some serious ish is comin' down the pike.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-08 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter Four

you certainly know how to end a chapter!

that was awesome!

Reviewer: joe mckee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-08 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Four

as usaul really enjoyed this chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next. loving the twists and turns in the plot and the way the characters are so beleavable and spot-on. hope to see more of this very soon. keep up the great work
joe

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-16-08 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Four

Woah...You do realize this was tortuously short (not sure if that's a word). But really it's both short and it leaves us hanging. So someone's been trying to brainwash Ororo. Good pick as she can easily wipe out a lot of people. The methods used...Stryker? Well update soon!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-08 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Three

Hmm....The head thingy coming off. Woo! Looks like everyone is seeing that Logan is showing real interest in our recovering weather goddess. I am surprised she didn't try to kill the prof straight away if that was her implanted mission. I wonder what will happen when Henry and Forge come. Good update!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Three

Read all 3 chapters...simply desperate for more, more, more. I love it!!

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three

Aww, but he is very sweet, lol.
Its becoming more and more interesting.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Three

"I missed you." Awww. I so wanted him to tell her that, I've been waiting for it; and then he did. *melts* :D
So there was something between him and Jean... ew! LOL ;) I'm with Scott here... glad it didn't last long.
"A current of…something…flowed between." ... yeah, a current of RoLo! w00t! :D

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Three

Lmao! He's really really sweet.

if you say so.

HAHAHAHAHAH!!! sooo, i'm a little confused... does she still have a room there ot did they box up all her stuff and put it away? Is she in a guest room?

I would say hurry up with the next chapter but we're kinda busy this weekend... heehee

Reviewer: Insignificant Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Three

I like your vibrant description of the physical and emotional attributes of the characters. This chapter definitely raised all kinds of tension within the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter[s].

Reviewer: Insignificant Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter Two

Another gripping chapter Windy. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Reviewer: Vanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-08 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Three

Loves it. Continue continue!!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-08 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Three

Wow...this story is simply brilliant. I love all of the rolo moments. Slow and sweet and powerful. Brilliant!

Reviewer: Changer the Elder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-08 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh dear, this absolutely made my day!
You keep doing great job with the character insight, I'm marvelled how those definitions fit.
Please, pretty please, write another chapter soon, I'm thrilled to see what's next.

true reader
C.t.Elder

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