Your summary really captured my interest so every time I popped into the Realm I kept telling myself I should give this a chance. Well I finally did. I'm not disappointed I have to say. It's very different and I always enjoy original concepts. It's quite intriguing and rather a pity no one's taken you up on the Round Robin but also that you haven't continued this.

I'm curious what mission you had planned for Storm, what position with the Devil and let me say I really got a kick out of your Devil. A very interesting idea of Hell indeed. Also, the sex seemed to fit in perfectly with your version of Hell. I'm not so sure of the relationship with Ororo and Remy, they seem intimate but aren't? Well no matter it's a story with much potential.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah I feel like because I have such a strong viewpoint in this story its hard for others to come in and take the story. Maybe I'll add two more chapters or so to get the ball rolling better. Also its my first roundrobin of any type so practice, practice, practice!!!

Wow.

The first few paragraphs set this up so well to be a parody in the same vein as "Dogma." Never knew there were disco balls in hell.

But there's almost too much packed into one chapter to drink in. This lightning quick sex kinda thrown into the middle of it, which almost would have been better if it had been "worked up to" so a reader could focus more on the dynamics of who Ororo and Logan are as characters. Sexually attracted to each other, and so far, with nothing to lose. For the moment!

I don't know how this could be a round robin, but I'll be interested to see how anyone adds to it and carries on the flavor of this story. It's clever, it's quick, funny, and decadent.


Author's Response: It was written in an hour and I figured I'd just post it for the heck of it...Thanks for the words. I wanted to establish some elements that if anyone cared to they could play off them but that doesn't have to happen...meh, its all in good fun!