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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-08 - 02:48 pm Title: chapter 2

I haven't read this yet but wanted to say I'm glad to see you put up a second chapter. I'm looking forward to reading this over the week when I have more time. I'll let you know what I think probably next weekend. My laptop(s) are all out and I'm stuck with borrowing!

Author's Response: Sorry for ur loss (i dont kno what id do w/out my laptop friend!!!) but im glad ur looking forward to the story

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-01-08 - 07:14 pm Title: chapter 2

Really great pants. That line floored me. This whole thing floored me.

I was upset the last time I looked for the update and saw that the second chapter hadn't been quite added yet, but you delivered. It was grotesque, it was compelling, it was occasionally touching. The piggy back scene tickled me when she leaned her head against him. Neither one of them was expecting her to give in, and it was almost a tender gesture. I love that.

Ororo evil is so seldom used. You do it so well.

Author's Response: Thank you...i was struggling with adding chapters so that was a test. DYK you cant use the word "curls" without the s on the site??? How RETARDED is that!!!!!!

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