Date: 07-29-18 - 04:47 am Title: Search and Return
OMGOSH are you ever going to finish this. Unless that was the end...I HOPE NOT! I love what you did with the characters, and Logan, oh wow you did an amazing job with him. What a jerk, but you love him for it. Ewww Emma Frost! She's got to go. Please update and finish this.
:)
Date: 02-15-15 - 12:34 am Title: Search and Return
Finish it .
Date: 04-16-08 - 09:44 pm Title: Search and Return
Getting caught up on my "stories" slowly but surely. I was very intrigued with this chapter, the concept's fascinating. Ororo's on the run from her rich daddy and stripping, that just blows me away. What I liked most though was Logan. You write him well.
Date: 03-04-08 - 03:31 pm Title: Search and Return
So good update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. GLad you like!
Date: 03-04-08 - 01:15 pm Title: Search and Return
I like it! Can't wait to read more : )
Author's Response: Wait no longer...more RoLo is here!Thanks for the review dear!
Date: 03-03-08 - 07:13 pm Title: Search and Return
wahahahahaha!
I enjoyed this! Lots of great lines that had me cracking up. "I'm gonna go Jet Li on her ass." hee hee hee...
The scene when she's dancing reminds me slightly of "Convergence" by windrider1 on this site, and in a good way. Lots of humor and sex appeal at the same time. I loved this. It's funny, RoLo writers have a thing about writing strip scenes...I have one in While You Were Out, too.
There were bits of grammar and punctuation that could be fixed, but this was still very, very entertaining. Love the title. Keep it coming!!!
Author's Response: My inspiration for this story was based on that strip scene...I just loved it and thought wow...we need more strip scenes. I hate when people portray Jean as weak so i was like this woman could definetly take Emma Frost's weak ass. And I hate Emma more than any other character on Earth.
Date: 03-03-08 - 03:59 pm Title: Search and Return
ok I'm hooked...
Author's Response: Glad to get you hooked....I enjoy doing that!
Date: 03-03-08 - 01:56 pm Title: Search and Return
I can't wait for the next ch.
When he told her, “Darlin, you wouldn’t want me to own ya.” My mind just screamed " I do."
Update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, now you don't have to wait. I think that's one of the best lines so far.
Date: 03-03-08 - 04:33 am Title: Search and Return
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!! I hope Xavier ok.
Author's Response: Glad you think that this looks promise. THat was exactly what I was going on. Keep reading its sure to get more intresting.