[Report This]Date: 03-10-14 - 04:55 am Title: Potluck
Its about damn time!!!! LOL
[Report This]Date: 03-29-10 - 07:32 pm Title: Potluck
As always my friend you leave us wanting more. Well written. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, woman.
[Report This]Date: 01-11-10 - 01:46 am Title: Potluck
Cee, this fic is absolutely fanTASTIC!! Btwn you and Jadebard, I'm never destined to get any sleep! lol I stayed up til 530a.m. reading the last couple chapters; i've been up late almost every night reading from the beginning, and I'll have you know I was almost late for work once last week reading from my iPhone while sitting in the car! yeah, i know that's my fault, but I just couldn't put this story down! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love your AU RoLo!!! MORE, PLEASE!
Author's Response: Don't lose sleep, woman! Or if you do, write me some more of that DIstant Calls of Fall fic!!! Work on that while you're up! No, I'm glad you're enjoying it. AU RoLo is the only kind I write anymore since the whole wedding business a couple of years ago, I put that as a disclaimer in one of my summaries a while back. I'm running out of canon comic material to base any of my stories on ever since, so AU was the way to go. I'll keep this going, provided I don't keep hitting my usual blocks. THanks for visiting, I've missed you!
[Report This]Date: 01-09-10 - 12:30 am Title: Potluck
This is good. Really good. I commend you for your writing of Ororo's past, it was very well done and really captured what a situation like that can be like. Also, I'm a sucker for jealous-triangle-misunderstanding type situations, I always have the worlds goofiest grin on my face. And again, I have to give kudos on your writing style. I really felt the pace change to the point that I was reading the sentences toward the end faster without even realising it. It's an admirable skill to be able to involve a readership in such a way. Finally! Those two hard heads found a common ground. Thanks for the read cee!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the feedback and hearing the bits that you liked about the story. I like "triangle" situations and watching how they are resolved, too. It's fun to me to see Logan jealous of Scott, since they are so different, and since Scott is so harmless. I almost went in the direction of Scott purposely making Logan jealous, or worse, actively pursuing Ororo to make Logan pee or get off the pot, but I decided that was overkill. Now that the jealousy problem has been fixed, they have other hurdles to clear in the meantime. Thanks for reading, Jade!
[Report This]Date: 01-07-10 - 07:22 am Title: Potluck
Finally! I swear I was almost going to write myself in the next chapter and force the two of them to get a long. No offense but this is how they should have resolved their first 'conference'. ^^
I have to hand it to Logan, ill-rational jealousy seemed to work in his favor this time. I also liked how the majority of the chapter was spent on him observing her. It was like majority of it was Logan almost acknowledging everything except how deep his feelings run for Ororo.
Ororo, i think this was was stronger chapter for her as well. We get a bit more of her motivations out. Now it doesn't seem completely out of place her deeply rooted fears and generalization of men. Granted, I find it ironic that while she easily categorize Logan as such the type but Scott remains spotless. Then again, Scott's the "safe" male friend so it's not surprising.
Now it took 18 chapters but our favorite couple has finally got over their first major hurtle. And that's the beginning. I know there is so much they need to tell each other. Which I'm really looking forward to. If they can pull it off without any real butting of the heads or even if they do butt heads just to give the other a chance. I think it might be clear skies for our RoLo.
Author's Response: There might be a little more turbulence! You know I love my angst! But you're right, buddy, Scott was the go-to guy and "girlfriend" for Ororo in this chapter, as he has been up until now. He's meant to be a buffer, yet at teh same time, to point the finger at how foolish they're both being. It's just funny, since usually, I can't stand Scott in the comics, cartoons or the movies. Now, with their first "meeting," I considered them going at it and making amends, but it didn't feel right to me, they needed some straight talk first, and they weren't going to get it if they were ripping each other's clothes off. So, I wanted to give them the chance to get a few thigns off their chests. Then, if they were still willing to deal with each other after a dose of truth, THEN they could rip each other's clothes off. Hee hee.
[Report This]Date: 01-07-10 - 03:30 am Title: Potluck
So i almost wanted to kill my roommate for continuously interrupting my dosage of Getaway!!! **grumbles** Where was I? Oh, an actual review.
Muy Bueno! Now we're getting somewhere. As for 'Ro's intense flashback. Yeah that's hard. My cousin experienced something similar about 2 years ago and it was hard. But your descriptions made it all realistic. You could almost feel her pain.
Moving on to lighter... er.. HOTTER things I loved he asked her to "Stay...". You understand better than most that one word can hold so much power. I adore your writing style but of course you know this!!!
Author's Response: yay! A Rhapsody review! Goodie! I'm glad you liked it, you fed some of the bits and pieces of dialogue after we talked, which helped me move it along. The "Stay" thing was the part of the scene that I was pushing for even when I was writing their argument/meeting. We'll come back to that.
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