This was excellent. I like the quiet friendship between Ororo and Scott. Your rendition of Logan's rebirth in the tank was well done, particularly how Logan relied on his senses even under sedation. It really felt like I was reading Weapon X instead of just watching the movie, yet I was still seeing Hugh in the tank.

Author's Response: I have to say again thank you. Ororo and Scott at first was hard to approached because I know I wanted a scene between them but for a while no dialogue would come to me. But then a day when i had more time at work then i could imagine everything just sort of came to me. The weapon X part I loved doing because I've read a lot of stories that always say how torturous Logan's nightmares were I wanted to take it a step further and actually show some of what those nightmares were. As well as give some what of a live perspective.