Plenty of action this chapter. You know your style reminds me a little of Stormcrow, you both go in and out of past and present tense. And you both have decidedly different takes on the movies which I’m not a fan of. Perhaps that’s why I’ve continued reading your story.

Author's Response: I haven't read any of Stormcrow's work, but I've always been pretty decent with action in my stories. One of the first series I wrote (under a different author name) was a major action story. So it comes natural. Doing a super hero story was an interesting challenge because everyone is used to the panels of how so and so fights. And since the movies did a poor job of displaying Logan's abilities, I had to be a bit more creative with all of what he can do. For a first attempt I think i did ok.

I love it. No, I'm not wondering why you updated again so soon! I'm wondering when the next one is forthcoming! When I update my fic in short order and have my chapters closely one after the other, sometimes my new chapters don't get read because people don't realize they're there, but I don't think you'll have that problem. I love your take on Vic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment on Vic, I was trying to lean more towards the Comic/90's cartoon version of Creed. That guy's more sadistic and a lot more talkative than the movie Sabertooth. Plus I finally got to my first fight! I r happy! This is where things are going to deviate greatly from the movie.