For some reason the way men right Ororo always intrigues me most especially the way you describe her, her eyes, her color, dipped in caramel, quite different. I actually like that, the different take although if I’m assuming wrong, that you’re a guy and you’re not excuse me please.

I like Peter here, like the resentfulness of Ororo too. In fact for some reason I can’t quite peg this story always makes me smile. I think I also read that in one of your other reviews and I thought ‘her too!’ assuming the reviewer’s a she.

Author's Response: Well yea, its weird. Something I noticed that some woman can often describe Logan perfectly because they have a good depiction of what is considered an attractive male and they play up to that with their description of him. Since I'm a male, I kinda do the same thing but with a woman's image instead. I tried to give Ororo an exotic look to her. Beautiful but someone that if you saw her walking down the street guys would be like "whoa..." A striking person that stands out. The almond eyes description i drew from Uncanny series how sometimes Ororo is drawn with Egyptian like lashes and slightly slanted eyes. They make her look so beautiful sometimes in the comic that i had to depict it here. And it makes it easy to understand why Logan got swept up under her spell. I liked having Peter as one of the main group because after Logan and Scott, Pete's one of my favorite male X-Men. And he hardly had any camera time in the films which sucked because he's a cool character. And they should have had a Colossus vs Juggernaut fight in the movie. I've constantly been thinking of this story as my way to correct some of the errors that the movie made. It's been a fun ride so far. ^^

Perfect. I love his reaction to Jean, with how he could have some fun with that one later. You could see that in his face in the movie, too. And I like him meeting Colossus! No one does that!

Author's Response: Yea initially when I was starting to write this I was planning out who I wanted to be in the story, because i always felt that just four X-men in the first movie was such a small cast for a superhero group. So I decided to add Colossus, especially since Pete's such a good guy anyway.