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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-09 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 6: Day One

The lingering scent of rain and the memory of a velvet voice brought him to pause. I think that sentence sums up what I enjoyed about this chapter the most. Ah, dissent is thick but desire just waiting around the corner. Your Jubes is a delight. Boxers or briefs and option C made me laugh. I hate movie Rogue. Is there a stronger word for hate? You know you mention colors a great deal, eye color, hair color, skin color, it’s a lot. You need a beta m’friend or have I mentioned that already? Looking forward to the nexts chapter, will read it at work and/or over the weekend.

Author's Response: I have to say the trinity of Jubilee-Kitty-Rogue was inspired by a story Batman_Wolverine did. I think the trio play real well with each other. Jubilee being so eccentric and Kitty is the sensible one. And Rogue falls into the center of the two. I know a lot of people hated movie Rogue. I think simply she was underused through the whole series. And I'll comment with a bit of pride that, CeeCee even stated how much she hated movie Rogue. But through my story she said she started to even like her. So i'd say keep reading, opinions might change. ^^^ My high use of colors...When i started fanfiction writing which will be almost 9 years this coming May. There was another author I loved named Acey that had another great story. He constantly refered to the color's his characters were wearing through out the story and i liked that. To me it seemed like a good refresh of description. It gave it a more livelier feel to everything, because from reading other stories I found its easy to get swelled into just a monotone world. Another famous author RA Salvatore, he tends to use that color refresh technique a lot too. Its just something I like to do because i try to be as descriptive as possible when I write. My ultimate goal is to illustrate completely through words the world I'm presenting to my readers. Granted I know things will get lost in transition but it's a goal I strive for.

Reviewer: storms rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-02-08 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

LOves it!!! Please keep up the great work. i'm loving the characters especially ro & lo.

Jubilee and kids are cute!

is it just me or is rogue a worrying character overall...tad bit clingy (but not w/o her reasons!!!)??? according to this timeline she's known him max week and a 1/2 to 2 weeks.

anyway cant wait to see how it all turns out

Author's Response: Hmmm... Well I have to say everyone's been commenting on Rogue's affections towards Logan. I don't' really want to say too much, because it will spoil things, but Rogue's actually gone through a lot in her past a lot of things that haven't been revealed yet. That plus, she's a young girl and Logan's has a sexy tough guy image, that a lot of young girls couldn't help but fall for. I mean he picked her up took care of her. Promised to protect her, then showed he was true to his word, with his fight with Sabertooth. Each one of those acts cemented more in Rogue's mind the validity of her affections for Logan. I mentioned before the Jubilee and Kitty scenes was one of my more favorite parts to write. Ororo/Logan and Jean/Logan were a close second. Although thanks for reading. I'm trying to crank out these chapters as soon as i can. ^^

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-08 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Day One

I love this story. The scene at the end with Rogue and Logan was cute, even though she was a bit too cozy... but I can't blame her lol

Now if only 'Ro would relax just a tiny bit...

Author's Response: Give 'Ro some time. Logan didn't exactly come off as prince charming when the first met nor is he doing much to change that impression too. Rogue I'm not going to comment on just yet. Just know she cares a whole lot about Logan at this time I'm not going to go into specifics of how much. Thank you for reading, I'm glad so many people are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Xntrk1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-27-08 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Day One

Niiiice. Keep up the good work; I'd love to read more.

You have the characters down to a T!

xD

Author's Response: Oh thanks! You don't know how much that means to me. I'm always boarderline paranoid that I'm making anyone Out of Character. And it doesn't help that this is my first official X-Men story too. D= But thanks again. Keep a look out because things are gonna be picking up in the next few chapters. ^^

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-08 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

Awesome near miss with Jean. It was hot. Rogue sure is getting cozy, though.

Author's Response: Means the no miss Storm one will be even hotter. ^^ And Rogue...Hee,hee,hee... I'm not gonna comment on that.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-08 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

'He tried to ignore all these things but a man was only so strong.'

Tsk Tsk Tsk... Dude's already got it bad *giggles*
Great Chapter

Author's Response: Ya, its terrible the hell, the *right* woman can do to a man. ^^ Thanks for reading!

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