I like how you didn’t immediately have Logan going on missions and instead he was offered the chance to go along as an observer. For some reason to me that is it makes more sense than suiting him up, as reluctant as he is & certainly was in the first movie. I like your version better. Forgive me for saying it’s disturbing to me about Jubilee and the other young girls fantasizing about Logan but it's probably because I never ever see that in the comics since they view him more as a father figure. I know movie Rogue (oh how I hate her) seemed to have a stupid crush on him and you’re just following in the line but it’s still disturbing – to me – nonetheless. I suppose I just dislike the movie teens because a lot of them don’t mesh with the comics so it’s nothing against your story it’s just me needing to vent. I’ll end this by saying something I've already said, I really like your Logan especially his banter with Scott.

Author's Response: I just want to comment on the thing about the girls...Since neither of them have that fatherly type of relationship with Logan in the story thus far as well as the movie. It then turns to your basic school girl crush type of thing. But I do recall Jubilee harbored a crush on Logan from the comics I've read recently. It wasn't as apparent as the one in my story. But it was present. To be honest, I was just trying to make things fun and Jubilee being the eccentric but having such an obvious crush on Logan, i thought it was fun.

Omg.....
Poor Silver Fox...
Geez, and it wasn't such a horrible day, either.

...now all hell's about to bust loose.

Update soon, this is really good!
You have Logan's attitude and demeanor down PAT

Author's Response: Ok...This will be clarified in the next chapter but that wasn't Silver Fox. Basically Sabs found another woman and had the great idea, "Hey this will *really* help the Runt remember me!" The thing with Silver Fox did happen but a long time ago. So it was like Logan was remembering that, plus what occurred today in Stark Industries. Which compounded his break. Thank you for the compliment on Logan, now if i can get everyone else down pat, I'll be golden. ^^ Major RoLo next chap!