Date: 02-07-09 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 10: Break
Interesting chapter. I liked it.
Date: 11-19-08 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 10: Break
More more MORE!!!
Keep up the amazing skills
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you, I've been working hard on the story! More should be up soon!
Date: 11-19-08 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 10: Break
Some more please? Please?
It was beautifully written, and I can't get enough. *sigh*
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks! I'm glad you're liking the story. I should have a new chapter up by tomorrow. So stay tuned and thanks for the review!
Date: 11-15-08 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 10: Break
Awwww! Great chapter :)
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks!
Date: 11-09-08 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 10: Break
Poor guy never stood a chance when she showed up with her hair down and that tiny white nightie. She definitely still has that nurturing, protective edge that you associate with comic book 'Ro. Keep going with this. I just like their exchanges. I also thought it was a good move making her watch Marie and realizing that she could reach out to him, too.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I have to say this chapter and the chapter coming up were ones I was looking forward to writing. I'm trying to put a different emotional ranges for everyone since i'm not going by the movie's plot. Some nice RoLo in store in the next chapter. ^^