I love this. I reviewed this before, and my review disappeared, I think.

I like his reactions to how pretty she looks, and her reactions to him. It's nice to just see good, old-fashioned attraction in a fic and some flirting.

“And what if I do… want?”

Awesome line. That, and Artie's "Teenagers are weird." That was right on the money.

Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up on that, especially the flirting between the two. One of my favorite things about writing romance stories is the playful flirting and banter between the couples. And when you deal with Ororo and Logan, two very strong willed people, Ororo is attracted to Logan but she sometimes acts as if she's just putting up with his advances although she loves every minute of it. And you have Logan, the guy is falling for the woman ( and who would blame him) but he still wants to play it cool, tough guy type of thing. Its fun because you have to play around a bit. Have a tango with words.